KenK
Avenger
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The Bad:
-Parts of this draft are trying WAY too hard to be Kevin Smith lite. The self-referencing is cute, but very "1996."
-No Frankenstein, no Gillman. Maybe due to Universal's legal hurdles?
-There's some very BIG gaps in the story's logic that makes this feel like a half-baked draft. Again, if it is legit, then I hope that Platinum Dunes has someone else working to tighten it up.
Uh, the original had some of the flimiest logic of any film I've ever seen (which is actually part of the charm of the film for me). For Christ's sake, the United States Military actually responds to a letter written to them in crayon by a seven year-old, with a full-on battalion and a tank that rolls right into the middle of town square at the end of the film!