Everyman said:What about your idea of a Fantastic Four movie? The one we got was terrible, and very ill-conceived from the get go. It could have been great...
Herr Logan said:In other news:
Zaphod, Cullen, where's the love you promised me?
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Zaphod said:Well, there is something I want to ask you regarding the orgin:
Would you accept the scenes of Bruce learning how to weild bola and boomerang to be part of a brief, montage flashback? I've currently got the origin down to 50 minutes, and that includes quick scenes of Bruce learning savate from a master living as a beach bum, and the 'way of human passage' in Africa, but I dont know how you feel about making the scenes of Bruce learning his throwing weapons just as brief? Let me know your thoughts.
Oh, and quick question, what do you think of Favereau directing 'Iron-Man'?
Herr Logan said:A quick, brutal street fight in plainclothes resulting in police intervention and at least one gunshot wound for Bruce.
A debut night for the Batman where he uses similar scare tactics to those of the dock scene in 'Batman Begins' along with the badass intimidation of the beginning of 'BATMAN' and some good old-fashioned, ground-level ass-kicking (and you would actually see everything that goes on, unlike in 'Batman Begins'... none of this "seeing from the criminals' point of view, right in the middle of the action bull$hit; the viewers came to see a Batman fighting in style, not transparent excuses for sloppy cinematic decisions). Swooping around, scaring several (2-4) perpetrators of a street robbery at night (either intervening while it's in progress or catching up to them directly afterwards), beating them up while appearing to be struck by bullets unharmed (the ol' spread the cape and keep the body between the shots trick) and then giving a rehash of the end of that first rooftop scene in 'BATMAN,' except with the lines from an earlier draft of the screenplay:
"You're trespassing, dirtbag."
"Trespassing? You don't own the night!"
"Tell your friends. Tell all your friends... I am the night."
A big-ass shootout fight with the Penguin (although Oswald will be the only one doing the actual shooting) and his assorted deadly umbrellas, culminating in lots of deadly attack birds being released from cages to chase the Batman off.
The scenes from 'Year One' where Flass and a bunch of other dirt cops give Gordon what amounts to a "blanket party" (I know you watch the 'Shield'), but in such a way that he doesn't need to go to the hospital, and also the one where Gordon does the same to Flass, but all by himself.
Raids on mobsters and dirty cops alike, in a similar fashion to the Bat-debut scene but more intense. Martial arts, smoke grenades, illusory tactics making the Batman come off looking invulnerable... the whole shebang.
The big GCPD vs. Batman fight in 'Year One,' with the flaming and collapsing building and the summoned swarms of bats.
Another brief scene with the Penguin, but a one-sided blitz from the Batman this time, rather than a "fight" per se.
The Catwoman will attack Falcone in his own home and quickly escape.
Zev said:I could see this as Bruce picking a fight with one thug and then quickly finding himself outnumbered and outgunned (literally) when other, unrelated lowlifes join in the fight on the side of the inital thug. Perhaps have him realize he needs allies (as in Gordon, not Robin... yet, at least) here.
Okay, seems like you have the basic concept of this fight pretty well thought-out.
This I could see as Batman getting his own game turned against him. He uses strategy and knowledge of the environment against his prey, Oswald knows the environment and so has a homefield advantage on Batman. Think of it happening in a giant room full of bird cages, with the conclusion of Penguin releasing all the birds and them immediately attacking Batman. Possibly the birds are trained to give away Batman's position (canaries sing when he gets near them, owls hoot, etc.). Establish this in an earlier scene where it's more innocuous, like Penguin walking through the birdhouse and being serenaded by the soudns of the birds he approaches.
These are self-explanatory, but important as a change of pace from the smooth, martial arts of Batman's fights.
I could see this again being important for the reversal. Batman is in control of the environments, using lots of tools. Then...
He has all his tools stripped away and has to improvise. I could see Batman getting really torn up here and pressing on. As a twist, maybe Batman has to race upstairs to evade the rising flames. Climaxes with him getting to the roof, cornered by police helicopters, then summoning the bats and deploying his cape as glider wings to make his escape. Also, it'd be kinda cool if he risked getting caught to pull one of the corrupt cops hunting him out from under some rubble, because Batman values all life.
Again, it'd be cool if there were a reversal of Batman finding a way to use Penguin's own birds against him or using bats against Penguin, as you mentioned earlier in the thread. Just for the whole turnaround-is-fair-play thing.
I'd like to think of this as a romance scene between Batman and Catwoman, even though Batman isn't in the scene. Think of it as showing they're "soulmates" (as much as I hate using a word like that). Catwoman plans her heists as carefully as Batman plans his raids and receives just as much pleasure in stealing something that Batman does in saving someone. Maybe a scene where Catwoman scopes out Falcone's defenses through binoculars (contrast with Batman reviewing blueprints and such on the Batcomputer) and says "This is going to be fun." Again, showing that they're basically two of a kind.
Herr Logan said:I don't really see the two issues as being connected, since James Gordon wouldn't be alongside the Batman in an actual fight, and the major lesson learned from this fight was always (as seen in 'Batman: Year One' and also 'Batman: Mask of the Phantasm') supposed to be that he needs to scare his opponents before the first punch/kick/shuriken/whatever is thrown.
At this point in the story (the entirety of the first movie), the Batman needs Gordon because Gordon can keep closer tabs on the activities of the corrupt Gotham City Police Department, both the crimes committed thereby and the criminals going in and out of the system. That sort of thing is really all the Batman needs from Gordon for now, as Gordon, even as a lieutenant, doesn't have a lot of authority in the current set-up (other than being charged with leading a task force to capture the Batman-- an assignment he decides he doesn't want soon after he receives it, when he learns that the Batman is a force for good). The Batman will have a better handle on those things when he creates the official Batcomputer (which can access pretty much all police records and other information through hacking) by the second movie, and Gordon will be in a higher position of authority, thereby keeping his usefulness to the Batman.
Also, police officers would enter the fight and wound Bruce, just like in 'Year One,' so it's not just street thugs.
Have you by any chance read the set-up of this fight I posted earlier? I doubt I put an actual play-by-play, but it gives the basics. Thanks to the God damn Hype search engine missing over a year's worth of posts, it'll be hell to find it, but I will try.
I never actually thought of the Batman using the birds against the Penguin physically. I was going to have him remember everything that went down with the Penguin the first time, prepare for it, and take out the birds immediately with gas when he came back so it wouldn't happen again. It's not only just making it safe for himself, but it hits the Penguin psychologically, since he doesn't know the birds are just sleeping instead of dead. I'm not really sure how he could use the birds against Cobblepot other than this. What are your thoughts on that?
I was also going to have the Penguin's use of birds in their first fight be the inspiration for the Batman using bats against the police.
I would have shown Selina Kyle-- in a black bodysuit, balaclava and climbing gear-- witness the Batman in action, either in his first costume appearance or somewhere near the mid-point of the film. I was originally going to have her hanging out of a building by her climbing wires right while retreating from a completed heist, but this could also happen while she's surveying her target's home through binoculars. Either way, she'll be impressed with the Batman's performance and inspired to put on an animal-themed costume herself, to empower herself psychologically.
The scene she's in, near the very end, would have her in Falcone's mansion when Falcone is talking to his consiglieri about why they have to be successful in their activities on the East End of Gotham to keep respect from the other criminals, now that their contacts in the GCPD and several key family soldiers and associates are locked up or otherwise out of the game. Catwoman will slink out of the shadows, knock the consiglieri out, scratch Falcone's face (leaving three scars, like in 'Year One') and warn him to stay away from the East End (her territory).
Catwoman would be given plenty of attention in the second film (which would, in a perfect world, be released the very next year, as the first two films and a year later the third and fourth films would be filmed back-to-back straight through), where we could actually see her planning and executing a heist simultaneously while the Batman plans and executes a raid, rescue or other tactical operation. That's kind of what you had in mind, right?
Do you think that's a decent set-up?
Not hypothetical, the guy is directing the thing:Herr Logan said:As in Jon Favereau from 'Swingers,' 'Made,' and 'Dardevil'?
Is this from news reports or a hypothetical question?
I don't know, honestly. I think whoever is directing this movie is a lowlife plebeian if they dare use the suggested idea of making Tony Stark's father the main villain, or even just give the father a large focus in the movie.
I am not very familiar with Iron Man, at least compared to how familiar I am with the X-Men, Spider-Man and even Batman comics, but I know enough to know that such a plot device is completely inconsistent with the comics and also a straight rip-off of 'Hulk.' I mean, in a Hulk movie, Banner's father should definitely have a big focus on the impact he left on Bruce's life, but he shouldn't be alive in present day and shouldn't be the present-day villain. These people disgust me!
So, yeah, that's all I have to say about that for right now.
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I think the technology-based villains lend themselves better to the universe that we’re dealing with. Not necessarily the types that are magical or imbued with God-given abilities and mutations. I’d rather go with people grounded in reality and see how far you can push that with out losing the realism that this franchise offers.
Zev said:Well, and this is just a thought, you could have Penguin try to escape through helicopter-umbrella and Batman throwing some kind of ultrasonic device (perhaps jury-rigging the gadget he uses to summon bats) onto Penguins so that the birds clog the propellors and Penguin takes a fall. Or it could just foul up his navigation to the point where he crashes into a billboard or something. A bit brutal, depending on how it's played, but effective. I think that's about the only way Batman would NEED to use a gimmick like turning Penguin's own birds against him rather than just giving him an old-fashioned whoopin'.
Zev said:To be fair, police officers entering the fight could also give Bruce the idea of having his own "man" inside the GCPD, but whatever works for you.
Think I missed it. You might want to edit the first page to have a Table of Contents with links to important posts before the thread gets too large and unwieldy to wade through.
Well, and this is just a thought, you could have Penguin try to escape through helicopter-umbrella and Batman throwing some kind of ultrasonic device (perhaps jury-rigging the gadget he uses to summon bats) onto Penguins so that the birds clog the propellors and Penguin takes a fall. Or it could just foul up his navigation to the point where he crashes into a billboard or something. A bit brutal, depending on how it's played, but effective. I think that's about the only way Batman would NEED to use a gimmick like turning Penguin's own birds against him rather than just giving him an old-fashioned whoopin'.
Alright. Mainly I was hoping to parallel Batman and Catwoman as flipsides of the same coin (Batman grim, stoic, enforcing the law; Catwoman joyful, enthusiastic, breaking the law). Maybe throw subtlety to the wind and go all John Woo, playing ballad music as Batman slo-mo threshes some thugs in a raid while Catwoman evades security guards to get into Falcone's mansion. Lots of cross-cutting and ironic segues to really build up the first meeting between Batman and Catwoman. People should leave the theater WANTING to see that sequel where Batman and Catwoman throw down and believe that Catwoman can win (which she... pretty much does. Often. Because Selina Kyle? Not so much with the jail time).
Zaphod said:Not hypothetical, the guy is directing the thing:
http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showthread.php?t=229924
Alas, the term 'realism' pops up again, which probaly means no Mandarin. But there wasn't mention of any Stark's father business either, Favereau said this about the villains of the movie:
Justin Hammer? Obadiah Stane? Anyway, back on topic.
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Sorry, sorry, sorry. I was being the anti JMS and doing research, specifically on the Joker. Been busy with that and what I laughingly call my writing.Herr Logan said:In other news:
Zaphod, Cullen, where's the love you promised me?
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BlackHardKnight said:Thank you Logan for the invite here. You know it is sad when the cartoon gets it right but the movie doesn't. X-Men is my example of not a really good movie. Logan was all wrong in that movie and the rest were just bit players. Sabretooth was a complete joke and waste. I waited for the Saban X-Men type Logan and Creed battle. That battle on the screen was utter crap, Singer is not someone I would have picked for this. One day a really director who knows X-Men will create the real X-Men movie we fans want to see.
Cullen said:Sorry, sorry, sorry. I was being the anti JMS and doing research, specifically on the Joker. Been busy with that and what I laughingly call my writing.
it'll come.... I hope...
AeonFlux said:I TOTALLY AGREE! I thought the same thing when I first saw the 1st X-Men movie(I didn't want to go at all ever since Anna Packin was casted as Rogue. I knew right away that was a TERRIBLE choice!) but my brother talked me into giving it a chance so I did and I regret spending money on it! The cartoon may not have been 100% perfect to the comics but it was close enough who cares that they changed something like how Rogue got Ms. Marvels powers exactly(in the comic she fought with her on a bridge and then after stealing all her powers she threw her off of it. In the cartoon Rogue steals a jet and Ms. Marvel comes to stop her and Mystique tells Rogue to grab her and not let go until Mystique said so).
I really wanna see a REAL X-Men movie. The third looks pretty cool but I won't see it cause Anna Packin just ruins it for me. She took my fav. X-Men and turned her into a worthless thing that is the opposite of the real Rogue! I want to see a sassy Rogue that says sugah and is flirty and tough as nails(even when Rogue first got her powers yeah she was scared but she was more frustrated. I remember a certain comic where Rogue had kissed some boys and Mystique got mad at her and she got all frustrated. This was right when Rogue first joined Mystique. She never was weak, ever! And that goes for before she got Ms. Marvel's powers.)
Anyways I'm sure you all have heard enough complaints about Rogue. I'm just glad nobody will get mad at me not liking the movie or that Rogue. Great forum topic!
Sounds like a lot of work on your part managing all of that. But, on the plus side, there are several threads there that you won't see me in...Herr Logan said:Coming soon: Multiple Safe Havens!
Sometime in the near future, I plan to create Safe Haven threads for each superhero property we've discussed so far. I'm going through this entire thread now to sort the different posts by subject so they can be available to both old and new contributors for reference in the new threads, but I'm not sure how to implement them. I'm making lists of the links for previous posts, which I may just post at the beginning of each new thread. I may get a small number of posts from here actually placed in new threads, but I'm not sure. What are your thoughts on this?
I plan to make threads for Spider-Man, X-Men, Batman, Daredevil, Iron Man, Fantastic Four, Hulk, Captain America, Superman, and possibly more.
The same rules will apply for the new threads as for this one (see first page).
Actual feedback on this proposal this time would be appreciated.
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Thanks for welcoming me here! I'm really glad you made this for people to vent out their anger and not get yelled at by people who don't know what they are talking about.Herr Logan said:Thanks, Aeon.
I agree with you on everything except the idea that Rogue by herself could ruin a movie that includes everything else that was wrong with the last two movies (besides Priesty McMopecrawler, who had every reason to quit this piss-poor project after Brian Singer made him spend extra hours in makeup to add superfluous tatoos whose only purpose was to make Singer seem creative...). Wolverine is still a pale, weak imitation, Cyclops is still the franchise' b1tch, Xavier may or may not die, Jean Grey and Wolverine still had something more potent between them than she and Cyclops, and on and on and on... Rogue is just one of many inexcusable screw-ups of this franchise. On the plus side, she was used as a plot device to showcase one of the only things they got right about Wolverine-- his penchant for getting attached to adolescent girls who need a semi-psychotic mentor figure in their lives. That doesn't excuse their messing with her character, though. Not at all.
I'd have waited until the second, third or fourth movie to bring in Rogue, if it went as such:
Movie 1: Intro to Xavier and X-Men philosophy and mission, featuring Cyclops, Marvel Girl, the Beast, Iceman, and the Angel as team members. Villains are the Brotherhood of Mutants-- Quicksilver, Scarlet Witch, Toad, Mastermind and maybe Unus the Untouchable-- led by Magneto.
Movie 2: Second generation enters, featuring Cyclops, Storm, Wolverine, Nightcrawler, Colossus and Kitty Pryde. Brotherhood of Mutants led by Mystique include Blob, Pryo, Destiny, Avalanche, and perhaps Rogue.
Movie 3: Dark Phoenix Saga, possibly with the Shi'ar aspects cut out completely. Jean Grey returns to the X-Men in the beginning and has a near-death experience and is possessed by an entity which enhances her power and gradually becomes malevolent. The Beast returns also, but in his furry incarnation. The villains would be the Hellfire Club-- Sebastian Shaw, Emma Frost, Donald Pierce, Harry Leland, an army of henchmen and Emma's Hellions. Sentinels are possible villains as well. Phoenix destroys herself toward the end,
Movie 4: Nightcrawler, Colossus and Kitty Pryde are injured in battle and take an extended leave from the team. The remaining original members, Iceman and Angel, rejoin the team. Rogue seeks Xavier's help and also joins. Gambit and Jubilee join as well. Mr. Sinister and cronies as villain.
Welcome to the Haven, Aeon, and thanks for posting.
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Cullen said:Sounds like a lot of work on your part managing all of that. But, on the plus side, there are several threads there that you won't see me in...![]()
Mister J said:That does seem like a lot of work HL. If it's your belief that the ideas are better served by separation, I can't argue with you. It may garner more interest from a larger part of the Hype's membership, thusly increasing idea flow. At any rate, I do believe that linking (or copying) the relevant posts from this thread in each respective Haven would be the most direct way to stimulate thought.
I'm not sure how a table of contents is supposed to work with a thread like this, and I would have to update it constantly. Branching out will take a lot of work if I'm to link previous posts, but at least it will be pretty much a one-time thing. Organization, or at least compartmentalization, could help the Safe Haven.Zev said:Think I missed it. You might want to edit the first page to have a Table of Contents with links to important posts before the thread gets too large and unwieldy to wade through.
No, it's not like that. I just wanted to get people's thoughts on the expansion idea before I wasted too much time collecting links.Mister J said:Please advise if I completely whiffed on the type of feedback you were looking for.
Zev said:Personally, I'd rather keep all the Safe Havens in one thread. Firstly, it's just more centralized and allows for some variety. So we go from "everyone talks about X-Men" to "everyone talks about Batman" and so on and so forth. I think most of the Safe Havens would die a quick death or become infrequently updated, given as how it is a somewhat specialized topic.
Just so we're clear, this thread isn't primarily for venting the anger that comes from the piss-poor quality and infidelity to the source material of superhero movies. It's allowed, but that shouldn't be the focus. The focus is to come up with ideas for something better, in as much detail as possible. But yeah, a little ranting here and there is okay, as long as the majority of what you post is creative and constructive instead of retrospectively critical. Anti-source material studio apologists aren't allowed to interfere with us, so unless an insolent interloper dares violate the sanctity of our Haven, we need not dwell on they and their inferior and shallow critiques.AeonFlux said:Thanks for welcoming me here! I'm really glad you made this for people to vent out their anger and not get yelled at by people who don't know what they are talking about.![]()
Yeah your right that Anna alone didn't ruin the movie, cause they were really really bad, but for the 3rd it looks kinda cool and definitly better than the last 2 but I won't be seeing it cause I can't stand that hideous thing as Rogue. I totally agree with you too! I can't believe people say movie Wolverine is "Sooo awesome! Kick ass! blah blah blah" I think he is majorly weak and nothing like the real Wolverine! I grew up mostly with the 90s cartoon(that got it right!) so I didn't really read the comics until about 7 years ago. So I don't know a lot about X-Men(but definitly more than the ones who like the films), except when it comes to Rogue cause I just love her! So I totally feel your pain with Wolverine being messed up.(he obviously is your fav character.) I really really love your ideas for the X-Men movies! They are totally awesome and my little sisters are agreeing with me!(They HATE the movies with a burning passion!) And it could work cause the cartoon series did it and movies run longer so it can definitly work! See that is the biggest mistake they made going into these films. They left the fans out! With something so big like X-Men you can't hire a Director who knows nothing about it and cast people as the characters who weren't into the X-Men or knew about it either and look nothing like their characters and expect the fans to love it. They should have done what Chris Nolan is doing with Batman(well at least this is what I hear) asking the fans who they want for the roles! I bet you if they had done this in the beginning, Hugh Jackman, Anna Packin, and most of the cast would have never even been mentioned for the characters!
Kate Beckinsale for Rogue? I forget if her frame is conducive to a curvy body or not (not that I wasn't looking when I saw 'Underworld 2,' I just have a bad memory, is all). Rogue has to be curvy. She should also look pretty young when she first shows up, like perhaps just under 18 in the second movie.Have you seen the alternate X-Men cast post( http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showthread.php?t=212054 ) some of the choices are good. Like Sean Bean for Magneto(I never would have thought, but those pictures have convinced me), Brian Dennehy as Beast, Emmy Rossum as Shadowcat, Vladimir Kulich as Sabretooth, Malcolm-Jamal Warner as Bishop, and my choice for Rogue(out of the actresses I know of): Kate Beckinsale.
Thanks for that, and thanks for posting.But anyways you should totally write the scripts for those and hopefully in the future they will remake X-Men and your scripts could be it!I mean they do this to Batman, why not X-Men?