Everyman said:I like your ideas about the Penguin and Two-Face, and most of them could work in sequels of the current movie continuity.
Zaphod said:Herr, your concept for Cobblepot already having served some jailtime in the re-start is fair enough, and makes sense seeing as how by this way you could exhibit Batman's detective-skills even further by having him dig up such dirt on Penguin before his first intrusion of the birded menace's hideout. Having already read your concept for the Batman's first and second meeting off The Penguin (and enjoyed it thoroughly I might add) I still beleive wholeheartedly that there should be flying-umbrella's someway down the line. It would suit the second movie best perhaps, if when the Batman went to hit-up Oswald for information, the Penguin, remembering his last run-in with the Bat and the sheer terror it caused him, flee's by way of umbrella in panic (since he still has his back to cover, he wouldn't be completely legite). Batman takes chase, utilizing his grappling-gun and fiber-cape (should he have this by the second movie?), eventually bringing down Cobblepot and asking him why he fled if he was so reformed? The Penguin could retort in his usual manner, in an attempt to make it seem like mere panic and instinct, before the Batman forces what he wants to know out of him.
While I have no bones about you wanting Joker in the second movie instead of Scarecrow, could you share you reasoning? I assume you want to cover the following ground in terms of arch-rivals:
Penguin
Joker
Scarecrow
Two Face
Not to mention the crime bosses and GCPD corruption that the Batman would be unearthing throughout all of this.
Herr Logan said:Thanks, Everyman.
I've been composing ideas based on the premise that it's another restart, rather than a continuation, but I could imagine using what's been made so far.
Rachel Dawes would not be featured in a sequel at all if I had my way, though. If she even mentioned, it would be brief and to the point, and would have absolutely nothing to do with the Joker killing her and needlessly and tritely making it "personal" between himseld and the Batman. Harvey Dent would be elected District Attorney, and James Gordon would move up to Captain early in the film. Seems rushed, I know, but it wasn't my idea to make him a sergeant in 'Begins' instead of a lieutenant.
The Joker would be the main villain of the second movie, and he'd have his full costume and persona, taking a lot of queues from the Animated Series and especially 'Mask of the Phantasm.' The Joker was excellent in that.
I'd call the sequel 'Batman Is Not Amused'.
[Jack Nicholson] Do I look like I'm joking? [/Jack Nicholson]
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Everyman said:I think Rachel was unecessary in Batman Begins, not a bad character per se, but the love interest got in the way of the story and there was nothing Rachel said or did that couldn't have been said or done by somebody else. I think Batman works better with doomed and/or conflictual love (Catwoman, Talia).
I didn't find the romance in "Batman Begins" that bad, m'self. At least it was set up better than in any of the other "Bat-films." I wasn't needed, of course, but I didn't feel my IQ dropping while it happened (unlike so many movie romances.)Herr Logan said:Exactly.
Technically, Dawes was the objct of a doomed love. But regardless, it was superfluous and an insult to the audience. It was specifically mandated by Warner Brothers Studios, too.
In any case, I wouldn't have had any love interest whatsoever in a first movie for the Batman. Perhaps a fleeting glimpse of Catwoman on the rooftops observing the Batman, but that's it. The Batman has real work to be done and won't allow love to get in his way. While I would certainly develop a dynamic between the Batman and Catwoman in a later movie, that's a minor aspect. Talia at least fits into a real story, since R'as Al Ghul's main interest in him is to make him marry Talia. If there was enough room in a franchise, I'd bring them into it.
Truth is, the best way to represent the Batman would be a live-action, one-hour TV series that stayed closer to the source material than even the Animate Series. There's very little that would be difficult in that, budget-wise. It would be a real psychological crime drama with fighting, swinging and detective work. All the major villains and ideas could be explored without the need to make every little thing lead into a big finale. Take the Animated Series, expand it to an hour, and darken it so that it's more in line with the Post-Crisis comics (and can get into real forensics work that involves blood and bullets and stuff they can't focus on too much in kids' cartoons).
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Herr Logan said:Truth is, the best way to represent the Batman would be a live-action, one-hour TV series that stayed closer to the source material than even the Animate Series. There's very little that would be difficult in that, budget-wise. It would be a real psychological crime drama with fighting, swinging and detective work. All the major villains and ideas could be explored without the need to make every little thing lead into a big finale. Take the Animated Series, expand it to an hour, and darken it so that it's more in line with the Post-Crisis comics (and can get into real forensics work that involves blood and bullets and stuff they can't focus on too much in kids' cartoons).
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Cullen said:I didn't find the romance in "Batman Begins" that bad, m'self. At least it was set up better than in any of the other "Bat-films." I wasn't needed, of course, but I didn't feel my IQ dropping while it happened (unlike so many movie romances.)
I'm also not partial to the whole post-Crisis Batman, darkening things up bit.The world doesn't need CSI: Batman. Darker than the cartoon, more violent than the cartoon (i.e. deaths instead of just the threat of death)? Sure. But not to the point it takes away from the story.
Bear in mind this stems from a lifetime of watching horror movies. Blood, gore, bodies on the floor does nothing for me anymore. I lean towards forties-fifties style film noir Batman, where the violence was plenty real without being excessive.
But that's just me.
Everyman said:It's funny, I always thought that it should have been considered more seriously by WB. Problem is, I think they consider tv series with superheroes not serious enough. The source material and t be more precise the format of the source material is more easily adaptable on tv. You could make real complex intrigues and story archs, make something very close to the comic book while cleaning the storyline and continuity of all the superfluous elements and inconsistencies. Batman isn't the only superhero who could benefit from it. I think Daredevil would have been perfect for a series as well, and even Iron Man.
Everyman said:I don't know why I mentionned Iron man really, I don't know much about him, I just thought that the fx could for him could be done relatively well in an ongoing series, and maybe the format of a tv show would be better to show Tony Stark's growing alcoholism and his heart problems. I agree with you on Daredevil. You can make a good story arch just having DD investigating on the Kingpin, and once he discovers who it is, you can make another story arch just to bring him down. You can also have a few good side stories, stand alone episodes, more supervillains and mobsters, etc.
The only problem would be to cast the Kingpin I think.
Zev said:Oh, Daredevil was BORN to be an FX series, a la The Shield. Daredevil is an intristically edgy and interesting character because, deep down, other superheroes consider themselves good people (hell, other SUPERVILLAINS probably consider themselves good people). He doesn't... which is why he dresses like the devil!
It was basically made for big season-long arcs. The Elektra Saga, Born Again, even Bendis's work... all great meta-plots that could easily be grist for a whole season by any show-runner of real merit (hey, if even cheesy old Battlestar Galatica can be turned into great TV, I see no reason why pre-Goddamn-Batman Frank Miller can't get the same treatment). It wouldn't be a freak-of-the-week series like every other superhero series ever, but rather more like The Practice, with Matt, Foggy, and Karen taking on a case, investigating it (here's where Daredevil does his thing), and having unresolved sexual tension while doing so (well, not between Foggy and Matt... unless the show's on Bravo of course).
The supporting cast would be, as mentioned, Matt, Foggy, and Karen; along with Ben Urich and maybe Detective Manolis. And Wilson Fisk as the Lionel Luthor of the series, masquerading as a wealthy philantrophist trying to clean up Hell's Kitchen (while he's really trying to [insert sinister scheme with very bad results for the good people of the Kitchen here]). Hell, you could even have him and Matt working together before Matt learned his new friend was really the Kingpin (this would all be in the premiere, no reason to drag out the "is he evil? Yes, yes he is" for-fricking-ever).
Effects budget would mostly be stuntwork to show Daredevil jumping around the city, "Shadow-vision" (which is one of the few things the movie did right and I'd like to see it once in a while before Daredevil does something particularly cool), and the occasional Big Bad. I say occasional because I don't want freaks of the week, I want Daredevil to have a real problem on his hands when Bullseye or Typhoid Mary stops by. If Daredevil wants to beat Typhoid Mary, it's going to take a few episodes to do it (less for, say, Stilt-Man).
And oh, think of the season closers! Elektra dying and Daredevil dropping Bullseye, Daredevil versus Nuke in the burning ruins of Hell's Kitchen, Daredevil finally beating Kingpin and declaring himself the NEW Kingpin... Shame it's never going to happen.
Herr Logan said:IIf Martin Short can play Jiminy Glick on a regular basis and Mike Meyers can play Fat Bastard, I think they can make someone look like the Kingpin.
Zev said:Oh, Daredevil was BORN to be an FX series, a la The Shield. Daredevil is an intristically edgy and interesting character because, deep down, other superheroes consider themselves good people (hell, other SUPERVILLAINS probably consider themselves good people). He doesn't... which is why he dresses like the devil!
It was basically made for big season-long arcs. The Elektra Saga, Born Again, even Bendis's work... all great meta-plots that could easily be grist for a whole season by any show-runner of real merit (hey, if even cheesy old Battlestar Galatica can be turned into great TV, I see no reason why pre-Goddamn-Batman Frank Miller can't get the same treatment). It wouldn't be a freak-of-the-week series like every other superhero series ever, but rather more like The Practice, with Matt, Foggy, and Karen taking on a case, investigating it (here's where Daredevil does his thing), and having unresolved sexual tension while doing so (well, not between Foggy and Matt... unless the show's on Bravo of course).
The supporting cast would be, as mentioned, Matt, Foggy, and Karen; along with Ben Urich and maybe Detective Manolis. And Wilson Fisk as the Lionel Luthor of the series, masquerading as a wealthy philantrophist trying to clean up Hell's Kitchen (while he's really trying to [insert sinister scheme with very bad results for the good people of the Kitchen here]). Hell, you could even have him and Matt working together before Matt learned his new friend was really the Kingpin (this would all be in the premiere, no reason to drag out the "is he evil? Yes, yes he is" for-fricking-ever).
Effects budget would mostly be stuntwork to show Daredevil jumping around the city, "Shadow-vision" (which is one of the few things the movie did right and I'd like to see it once in a while before Daredevil does something particularly cool), and the occasional Big Bad. I say occasional because I don't want freaks of the week, I want Daredevil to have a real problem on his hands when Bullseye or Typhoid Mary stops by. If Daredevil wants to beat Typhoid Mary, it's going to take a few episodes to do it (less for, say, Stilt-Man).
And oh, think of the season closers! Elektra dying and Daredevil dropping Bullseye, Daredevil versus Nuke in the burning ruins of Hell's Kitchen, Daredevil finally beating Kingpin and declaring himself the NEW Kingpin... Shame it's never going to happen.
cerealkiller182 said:Jiminy Glic and Fat Bastard are stupid looking though. They are jokes. I dont think that a fat suit on anybody would be taken seriously.
Herr Logan said:They're meant to be stupid looking. A much better example (which I didn't think of at the time) is the Juggernaut (the muscle-suit, not the fetish garments) from 'X-Men 3'. Change the dimensions of the bodysuit and make it look like real flesh, and you can make a proper-looking Kingpin.
If the stunts and special effects for Fisk are done right (there wouldn't be that many, compared to other villains), people will take him seriously.
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Zev said:Or, for instance, Mr. Hyde from the LXG movie. That was all make-up.
Herr Logan said:I actually disagree about that last statement. Devil costume or not, Daredevil has always (before Bendis and his adorable attempts to be edgy and "real") been a goody two-shoes. Even during-- hell, especially during-- Frank Miller's run. Miller had Daredevil show some hardcore restraint. He risked his life to save Bullseye on the slight chance that his homicidal behavior stemmed from a brain tumor (surprise, surprise, Horn-Head, he's as much of a scumbag post-op as before), and he even tried to save the bastard after he'd killed Elektra. He's also maintained a blind faith in the law from the beginning. These are things I personally look down upon, but it would be hypocritical of me to sanction anything less than this kind of childish idealism in any Daredevil adaptation. The guy is a hypocrite (moreso than most crime-fighters) and a fool (like most crime-fighters). Still, he sticks to his convictions (and acquittals, hah hah!) and, whether or not he outright says or voiceovers what kind of person he is, he clings tenaciously to his ideals and expectations of what a good person is, which leads me to believe that he basically believes he is a good person.
In summation, I would insist on Daredevil's idealism--annoying as it is-- being in the forefront, while still maintaining a gritty, cynical atmosphere for the city in which he operations. That's the contrast, right there. Most people have their hearts hardened and have lost hope, but the man in the devil costume hasn't let it ruin his ideals. Not yet.
One difference I would want between Nelson & Murdock and the lawyers on 'The Practice' is that they only represent people they know are innocent. On the other hand, didn't that rule become standard for the comics only after Foggy Nelson learned who Matt was? I know that even into the 80's, Murdock was taking guilty clients ('The Death of Jean DeWolf'). Maybe this isn't a feasable way to go. I just find it really, really hard to imagine Murdock knowing his client is a scumbag, and still giving a superb defense. Maybe Daredevil would investigate the activities of the defendant's alleged accomplices? Maybe he'd do his very best in court and then go after the acquitted criminal when he inevitably offends again?
I think perhaps the Season 1 should show Matt and Foggy as part of a fancy law firm that takes guilty clients with a lot of money. By the end of the first season, they'd accumulated enough money to start their own two-man law firm-- Nelson & Murdock-- where they can choose all of their clients at their own discretion. Karen could be an administrative employee who worked at their old firm and goes with them in Season 2.
I really, really did not like how they portrayed Foggy Nelson in the Daredevil movie. He's not a sleazy guy who just wants money and doesn't care who gets set free to harm more people. He's an idealist, too. He just doesn't have the innate ability to tell who's lying and who isn't, and isn't nearly as good at playing to the jury at a trial. I want Foggy to be on the same page as Matt, and when they get their chance, they do things their way, not the typical high-priced lawyer way. It's a reduction in pay and accomodations, but it's what they want to do.
I'd have Murdock and Nelson each have their particular strengths they bring to the trial. Foggy would be very good at research and composing logical, poignant arguments in a short period of time (I've seen that of him in the comics a few times), and Matt has the people skills (due to his powers), is deeply intuitive with both people and tracking down evidence (again, because of his powers) and is the one who speaks in court for opening and closing arguments, if not the whole trial. I'd have Foggy defer to Matt a lot with choosing clients, since he knows Matt's intuition rarely ever steers them wrong.
It sounds to me when you say "freaks of the week" you're evoking 'Smallville'. Yeah, nothing from that show should carry over, except the basic premise of heroes and villains.
I would want all of the villains from Daredevil who could be translated with the utmost faithfulness in the show. That means costumes, gimmicks, powers if they got 'em, etc. Doesn't mean it can't be written well and not embarrassingly. Sure, Stilt-Man seems ridiculous, but so are many real criminals, and if I remember correctly, Daredevil came to meet Stilt-Man through a lawsuit and the villain had much more than hydraulic pants as weapons. He'd be chock full o' fancy gadgets, and that would take some special effects work, but it doesn't have to be campy.
That last one shouldn't happen until several seasons have passed. Hell, I could do without Bendis' "contributions" altogether. Admittedly, his Daredevil stuff has been his best work in Marvel (i.e. it's been the least harmful and outrageous batch changes to the Marvel Universe).
Despite a few of my disagreements, I like a lot of your ideas. Thanks for posting, Zev.
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Cullen said:GAAAAAH!!!
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Two hours of work, including research and everything, and I was logged out before I was done! All that work, all that time wasted! My Brillance! My Brilliance! God, why must my Brilliance ever be lost forever more!
No. This is too much. Cullen go sulk now. Sulk big time.I'll try again once my shattered ego is restored.
it was sooooo good... shakespere would have wept blood... the hack...
I agree that the Dawes role could have been filled by Harvey Dent (for the D.A. stuff) and Leslie Thopmkins (for the Bruce Wayne stuff). It may well have been better over all.Herr Logan said:It was insulting, nonetheless. There was no need for it whatsoever, and it can be seen as a waste of resources as well. By putting Harvey Dent in that role (or Finch's role, with Finch's actor in the Assistant D.A. role, rather), more real storytelling could have been done, without the blissfully few minutes of empty, shallow space. No matter how soft the blow, it's still a smack in the face of not only fans, but people who came to see a story that works above the level of a 15 year-old's attention span.
Your description of the TV series sounds most excellent.Herr Logan said:Pre-Crisis Batman was very much about detective work, although it wasn't allowed for realistic violence and crime scenes to be featured in Seal-approved comics back then. I'm not suggesting an abundance of gory violence, nor am I suggesting an excessive amount of formulaic forensics scenes. I just think it's important to show that the Batman has the intelligence, resources and will to solve crimes as well as throw punches and scare people. Almost every episode should feature some form of detective work, but it doesn't always have to be the same thing every episode. The show would eventually, barring premature cancellation, cover every type of detective work (except for a good deal of police bureaucratic procedures, although those would be shown on the part of the police on the show). Hell, the Animated Series did that quite a lot, but they weren't allowed (presumably) to show crime scenes where violence took place and blood was apparent.
Having read "The Man Who Falls", I wish that more of it was in "Batman Begins." Good stuff.Herr Logan said:I would absolutely want the tone to be noirish, but not solely limited to that. The Animated Series, again, covered almost all of the important aspects of the Batman mythos and balanced a good number of themes. Even the darker aspects of the Batman's condition were touched on, although most episodes ended on a more optimistic note than the moments where the Batman despaired. I'd want to cover every important aspect as well. I would translate and expand upon the events shown in the 1989 Denny O'Neil story 'The Man Who Falls,' which show him forging documents that somehow allowed him to leave Gotham at the age of 14 and go on his globe-trotting mission to learn what he needed to begin his mission, and some of the instructors he studied under (Kirigi, a martial arts master in the mountains of Korea; Henri Ducard, a brutal and cunning bounty hunter; every reputable detective in the world, etc.). He also trained with the FBI for six weeks and visited numerous college campuses. This isn't necessarily in order.
All well and good. One hopes for Silver St. Cloud to be the love interest, but that's just me being me.Herr Logan said:This would play out from Year One to well past the adoption and training of Robin (who'd be a teenager at the time of his training in this series-- or in a movie-- not a young child). All the major villains would get their turn.
That's all for right now.
Cullen said:"Frequent insolence?" Moi? Surely you jest. Je suis mais un homme humble menant une vie humble. Ce que vous voyez pendant que l'insolence est mais ma supériorité normale venant à travers.![]()
(For the record, I don't speak more than two words of French, so all of that may well be grammatically incorrect. Of course, I mess up English grammar half the time, so that's all par for the course...)
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Probably didn't deserve it. And you might regret going through the effort after reading this post.
I agree that the Dawes role could have been filled by Harvey Dent (for the D.A. stuff) and Leslie Thopmkins (for the Bruce Wayne stuff). It may well have been better over all.
The thing is is that the presence of Rachel Dawes doesn't offend me in the slightest for three reasons.
First, she fills three roles at once. Again, she acts as Dent and Thompkins, as well as the love interest. You and I might roll our eyes at the need for a love interest, but bear in mind the film makers don't have to satisfy just the fans' needs. They have to satisfy studio execs., producers, and God alone knows who else. These people want a love interest. They believe the movie audience needs a love interest. They've been insisting on it since the start of movies. Check out the original King Kong, you'll see what I mean.
In a perfect world, this wouldn't be the case. Sadly, this isn't a perfect world.
Second, as Dawes fills those three roles, she becomes, at least from my perspective, a far more interesting character than any of the previous movie love interests. She's active in the storyline, is a force within the overall investigation (albeit a minor one), and is less a damsel in distress than a hero in her own right.
On this, she actually has a relationship with Bruce, instead of a love-at-first sight type nonsense. That alone is worth cheering about (and is the only reason I put Dawes over the Burton Catwoman.)
Finally, while fidelity to the comics is admirable and a worthy goal, the filmmakers should be allowed the chance to expand and perhaps improve on the mythos. Remember that Alfred was portly until the movie serial made him thin, Superman was invincible until the radio series created Kryptonite, and Mr. Freeze was a Bond-type villain until B:TAS gave him a back story. All three improved and enhanced the mythoses (mythoi?) they touched.
Now do I think Dawes's addition as a new character is worthy to be included with the aforementioned trio of changes? Hell no. Even I have limits. But I don't begrudge them the chance to make their own modification to Batman's history. At some point they might make a change/addition worth keeping.
On your "slap in the face", I obviously disagree. In any case, I say it's better that than the knee to the nuts that is "Batman and Robin" and "The Batman". Crap like that could still happen to the series.
On your "level of a 15 year-old's attention span", I have absolutely no idea what you mean. At 15 I was reading Moby Dick, Dracula, and the works of H. P. Lovecraft. Not to mention Julius Caeser. None of which is suitable for the attention deprived.
Your description of the TV series sounds most excellent.
Having read "The Man Who Falls", I wish that more of it was in "Batman Begins." Good stuff.
All well and good. One hopes for Silver St. Cloud to be the love interest, but that's just me being me.![]()
P.S. - The board did it to me again! Luckly I backed myself up this time...