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You look at other movies where the protagonists are a couple who dont need some kind of drama to further the story, like the old Thin Man films for example. I get they wanted to give Wade some tragedy for the beginning but was it worth it ultimately? The plot couldve still went through well without the death. Im no screenwriter so take my word with a grain of salt:
Have Vanessa reveal she is a mutant early in the film. Have a debate whether Wade should allow her to help him on his missions, so you can do something with the character at least.
Its already established Wade likes kids so going to the orphanage without it being an X-Men job while Colossus shows up at the same time, make joke about coincidence. He still goes to the ICEbox regardless. Sure, you lose the X-Men jokes but what are you gonna do?
Have him deny Vanessa joining the X-Force but she disobeys him and enters the truck chase. Have him accept she can handle herself and have her in the climax.
Again, Im not sure this is even good. Its certainky nothing original but at least shed do something and develop rather than what happened. What do you think? Anything to improve/add to it?
As for Cable, having Russell destroy the city he failed to protect should be enough for him to want his blood. Kinda feels selfish for him to do this for his family exclusively.
I'm just glad you write on a forum, and not screenplays. As for the last paragraph re:Cable, I think you missed the entire point of his plot. And I actually think you missed what the entire movie is about. The point is that we meet the characters in a moment in which they ARE selfish, and are driven by their loss and pain.
A debate about whether or not a superpowered Vanessa should join him on his missions is simply NOT what the entire movie is about.