MercuryEnigma
"The Not-So-Super Hero"
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MercuryEnigma, you have some very good ideas. The only 2 parts that could use some more work is the final confrontation (anti-climactic) and the ending (personally, I find it wrong to end a trilogy with a cliffhanger).
Yea, the ending def needs a bit of work. You're right about the Joker ending, but I want to through it in there somewhere. Thanks Gianakin for the constructive criticism! I surely can use it as its a rough draft.
Also, keep in mind that I wouldn't make this a very theatrical, colossal and big-stunt-oriented Batman, like Begins and DK were. I'd bring it back to the roots. Seven meets Silence of the Lambs meets film noir.