X3: Rewrite-A-Scene

[LastSunrise1981]

I am rewritting he whole film, heres what I got so far

Black. A glowing light is shown in the middle of the screen

Hank McCoy’s voice is heard.

“Mutation,”​

Three streams of light come out of the center light.

“It is an essential key for human survival. Some may fear it, some may hate it. Some my try and cure it. It is usually taken thousands and thousands of years. But every few millennia, evolution leaps forward.”​

The streams of light have turned into a bird. Camera zooms into the middle where a blue flame bursts onto screen. Credits are coming up while cells duplicate and DNA bands are shown while blues flames continue to burn in the background. Pan to…

X3
THE LAST STAND​

An “X” shaped door slams and a circle in the middle spins. Camera zooms into the blue light in its center.

Int. Scene 2

20 years ago​

(Keep this scene cut the angel scene)

INT Scene 3
Black. Explosions and missiles can be heard. Boom. The scene glows. Black. Boom. Glows. Explosion is seen. Wolverine jumps out of the way.

WOLVERINE:
You’re gone a few days and the whole world goes to hell!​

A missile comes by Wolverines head. He ducks and it goes at Iceman and Shadowcat.
Iceman tries to freeze it.

ICEMAN:
It’s not working!

SHADOWCAT:
Let me try.​

Shadowcat grabs Iceman and the missile goes through them.

SHADOWCAT:
Now who’s the damsel in distress?​

Iceman smiles at her. Rogue sees them.

COLOSSUS:
Look out!​

Colossus puts his hand on Rogues check. Rogue metals-up as a piece of rubble comes flying towards them both. It shatters on impact and both are unharmed.

ROGUE:
That felt weird

COLOSSUS:
You're telling me!​

An echoing voice is heard.

XAVIER:
X-Men, keep moving.​

Colossus and Rogue regroup with Iceman and Shadowcat.

SHADOWCAT:
Piotr, where are the others?

COLOSSUS:
Nightcrawler’s getting civilians to safety, Storm’s leaving it obstacles and Cyclops is trying to slow it down.​

Lasers sweep the nearby remains of a house and another missile is launched right passed the X-Men, Nightcrawler then *BANFS* behind them.

NIGHTCRAWLER:
Keep moving! Ve are running out of time!​

The X-Men continue to move.

ICEMAN:
Nightcrawler, you get everyone to safety?

ROGUE:
You think he just decided to abandon his job, unfinished, to come and baby-sit us?

Rogue looks frustrated. Storm comes in.

STORM:
I set up a tornado back there; if Logan fails the tornado should do it. If not then hope for the best.

SHADOWCAT:
What happened to Cyclops?

WOLVERINE:
He couldn’t make it. Watch out Storm, your tornado died out pretty fast. He’s coming and fast.

STORM:
So why aren’t you slowing him down?

WOLVERINE:
Relax me and tinman got this.​

STORM:
Logan we work as a team.

A giant robot lands a half mile away and the earth shakes.

WOLVERINE:
Good luck with that!

Wolverine looks over to Colossus.

WOLVERINE:
Two words, bub. Fastball Special.

Colossus picks up Wolverine, spins around twice and throws Wolverine directly at the Sentinel Robot. Wolverine flies out the other side. Nightcrawler *BAMFS* into the air, catches Wolverine and *BAMFS* back on the ground. The Sentinel falls over.

CEREBRO:
Simulation terminated.

The scene morphs into a large, circular metal room.

WOLVERINE:
Hey Colossus, you throw like a girl.

COLOSSUS:
Cut me some slack Canuck, I pitch with my left!

Wolverine turns left out of the room while the rest of the X-Men turn right. Storm fallows Wolverine.

STORM:
Logan what was that?

WOLVERINE:
A danger room session.

STORM:
A defensive danger room session.

WOLVERINE:
Well the best defense is a good offense. Or is it the other way around?

STORM:
Logan,

WOLVERINE:
Look, if you don’t like it you can punch and scratch Cyclops all you want, I’m just the substitute.

Cyclops walks by the other hall.

WOLVERINE:
Speak of the devil.

Wolverine catches up with Cyclops.

(Sorry I stopped with centering and Bolding halfway but my fingers were hurting with typing

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and over and over​

I really love what you put together and the interaction between Logan and Colossus is awesome.

That is something Logan would say to Colossus too.

Awesome though, keep up the great work. It's interesting how some fans on the internet write better and have a better imagination than some "professional screenwriters".​

 

[Asteroid-Man]

Haha, thanks so much. I got more scenes

 

[Asteroid-Man]

Flashback scene. I changed it a bit

An “X” shaped door slams and a circle in the middle spins. Camera zooms into the blue light in its center.

Int. Scene 2

20 years ago…
INT. A quite suburb.
A blue Mercedes Benz pulls onto the side of the road. Two men come out. Professor Charles Xavier and Eric Lenshier.

ERIC:
Do we really have to meet them all in person, Charles?

CHARLES:
This one’s special.

They ring the doorbell and Mr. and Mrs. Grey greet them.

MR. GREY:
Let me just call her and you can be on your way.

CHARLES:
Mr. Grey please, I would rather speak with you before her.

INT. the Grey Living room.

Mr. Grey, Charles and Eric are all sitting on sofas.

CHARLES:
When did this start?

MR. GREY:
You mean when did she start being… a freak?

Eric frowns and all the metal in the room begin to shake. Charles sends him a psychic message. Eric, he is not evil. He’s just uninformed.

ERIC:
Well Mr. Grey let me inform you that your daughter is not a freak. In act, in the evolutionary chain, she is superior to you.

Eric looked at Charles and sent him a psychic response. Informed.

MR. GREY:
It all started when her best friend had died. There was an accident. A hit and run driver. We were all devastated. Jean took it harder then any of us. She stopped eating and became angry a lot quicker then usual. And now she is always reading our minds and if she is not happy she throws things across the room with her mind. Please, take her to your school and fix her.

Once again the metal started shaking harder this time and the picture frames fell off the walls. Eric, stop it!

CHARLES:
Could you please call her down?

MR. GREY:
Jean honey, would you please come down? There are two men here to see you.

A thirteen year old girl peaked her head from behind the stairs. Her father got up and left at her sight. She came and sat down where her father was sitting and look at Eric. Xavier sent her a Psychic not. It’s very rude, you know, to read my thoughts or Mr. Lenshier’s without our permission.

ERIC:
Did you think you were the only one of your kind young lady?

Jean frowned. What’s wrong with me?

CHARLES:
We are mutants Jean.

ERIC:
Homo-superior, Charles,

Charles ignored Eric’s remark.

CHARLES:
We are like you.

JEAN:
Really? I doubt that.

Jean stayed put and without any hesitation all the cars outside began to float as well as a man’s lawnmower and the water out of a gardener’s hose.

ERIC:
Oh Charles, I like this one.

CHARLES:
Jean, I trust you read out pamphlets?

JEAN:
Your advertisements? Yes.

CHARLES:
So I trust you are packed?

JEAN:
Yes.

CHARLES:
Then let’s go.

 

[Asteroid-Man]

Care if I add something?

Cont'd

Logan: I'm coming with you

Scott: No your not

A voice is heard: Scott,

Scott: Professor?

Prof. X: I tried looking for her like you asked me.

Scott: And?

Prof: Get to Alkali now, Logan I want you and Ororo to go with him

Scott: Professor! I-

Prof: Scott, be prepared, there is something there, but I fear it's not jean.

Cont'd

INT. X-JET
Storm is piloting, Wolverine is seated beside her and Scott is asleep in the back.

WOLVERINE:​

What did the Professor tell you ‘Ro?​

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STORM:​

Well “Lo” he said there were strange weather readings coming from here as well as high energy readings coming from the exact middle depth of the lake. And don’t call me “Ro” again.​

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Cyclops wakes up.

CYCLOPS:​

Why haven’t we landed yet?​

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WOLVERINE:​

Incase you haven’t looked out the window, there’s too much fog, we might land on a tree or in a ditch.​

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CYCLOPS:​

So why don’t we land on the water?​

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WOLVERINE:​

The water’s boiling.​

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CLYCLOPS:​

Storm why don’t you-​

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STORM: ​

Cyclops, I got this under control relax.​

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Storm’s eyes went completely white and the fog was blown away. The X-Jet landed and Cyclops went running out and stood on a large rock watching over the water. Wolverine and Storm fallow him but stop further back and leave him some space. Cyclops hears voices.

CYCLOPS:​

Get out of my head!​

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He shoots an optic blast at the water. It begins to boil more as steam rises. Wind picks up and a whirlpool starts to form. A water cocoon rises from the water and Cyclops is thrown back and lands on his back by Wolverine and Storm. They help him up and all of them look at the cocoon in horror. The water splats away and Jean is floating in the air. She is glowing like fire.

CYCLOPS:​

Jean?​

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JEAN:​

I am no longer the Jean Grey you once knew! I am Fire! I am life incarnate. Now and for ever I am Phoenix.​

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Jean falls into the water and Cyclops jumps in after her. Minutes later he swims up with her in her arms. He carries her to the ready X-Jet and sets her down on the bed. The X-Jet flies away from Alkali Lake.

 

[gambitfire]

um in that danger Room scene i wouldn't mind if Storm sounded somewhat more tough. I dunno i think she should put Wolverine in his p[lace like the real Storm would.

 

[Asteroid-Man]

She kinda takes charge in this scene. Here it is... (continues the last scene I typed)

 

[Asteroid-Man]

INT. X-Jet

Cyclops is leaning over Jean. The X-Jet is now on Auto-Pilot, Wolverine is reading a newspaper with the headline “Sasquatch seen traveling south” and Storm is watching the monitors. Cyclops begins to talk to the unconscious Jean.

SCOTT:​

Why. Why did you leave us like that? Why did you leave me like that? Didn’t you have any love left for me?​

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The suite rack tips over.

SCOTT:​

Jean?​

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Wolverine sits up terrified and looks at the radar screen.

WOLVERINE:​

Storm, I think the X-Jet’s computer has a virus.​

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Cyclops looks at Wolverine, Storm walks over to computer.

CYCLOPS:​

What is it?​

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STORM:​

It’s a message. From… Jean.​

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CYCLOPS:​

What’s it say?​

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STORM:​

I’m not Jean. I am Phoenix.​

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CYCLOPS:​

Jean? Are you alright?​

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COMPUTER:​

I am not Jean! I have risen from the ashes of hell. I am not the angel you once knew!​

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STORM:​

Jean, listen to me. Whatever is wrong with you, the Professor will fix it.​

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COMPUTER:​

You’re with him? He is the one who took me from my home and destroyed me!​

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WOLVERINE: ​

What the hell is she talking about?​

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COMPUTER:​

Take me back where you got me from and leave me there!​

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WOLVERINE:​

Alkali Lake?​

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COMPUTER:​

No you fool! Where Xavier and first took me from twenty years ago.​

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CYCLOPS:​

Storm, contact the Professor.​

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Storm goes to the back of the jet.

COMPUTER (no one is reading monitor at this point):​

You’ve made me angry.​

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Jean’s body begins to glow like before and she is floating over the bed gently with her hair flowing out.

WOLVERINE:​

Holy *****. Cykes, take a look at this.​

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Wolverine makes a hand gesture outside. There are rocks floating. Jeans face tenses and the rocks and boulders begin launching themselves at the Jet.

CYCLOPS:​

Logan, can you pilot this thing?​

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WOLVERINE:​

What do you have in mind?​

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CYCLOPS:​

Fallow my lead.​

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Cyclops unbuckles and pulls down a ladder from the ceiling he begins to climb up.

CYCLOPS:​

Flip that green switch and leave about 8 feet of space from the rocks at all times.​

Wolverine understood what the plan was.

WOLVERINE:​

Just don’t blink while you’re shooting, bub.​

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Cyclops sticks his head out of the sunroof and the Jet comes back a bit. A rock goes at Cyclops’s head. He ducks and begins to shoot. He is hitting them all and bigger pieces start coming. Cyclops hits a big dirt clod and dirt gets all over the windshield. Wolverine splashes the water onto the windshield and wipes it.

WOLVERINE:​

Easy monocle, if I pilot blind, you’ll die too!​

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Cyclops shoots an optic blast into the X-Jet from outside and it hits Wolverine in the shoulder. It quickly heals.

CYCLOPS:​

Don’t flame the shades.​

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Wolverine slams the acceleration and Cyclops gets smacked in the face by a rock.

WOLVERINE:​

Don’t get too cocky.​

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Storm comes back.

STORM:​

What’s going on?​

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WOLVERINE:​

My first flying lesson. How’m I doin’?​

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CYCLOPS:​

Jean’s trying to bring us down. What did the Professor say?​

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Storm pulls a Cerebro helmet off the wall and hooks it to Jean’s head.

STORM:​

He said to put this on her and he will handle it from the mansion using Cerebro.​

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WOLVERINE:​

Looks a lot like ‘Neto’s helmet, doesn’t it?​

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STORM:​

Actually, I think it does the opposite. It makes minds more vulnerable.​

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A rock plows Cyclops and his glasses get knocked off.

CYCLOPS:​

The Professor better hurry.​

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Cyclops was now shooting blindly. Jean’s face was scrunching up.

STORM:​

Scott, Logan, that’s enough. I will take it from here.​

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Cyclops got back down reached into his pack for an extra pair of glasses. Storm was now piloting and her eyes went white. The wind outside picked up. It swirled the rocks and bashed them together. A big rock was coming in.

WOLVERINE:​

Storm?​

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STORM:​

I can’t use any more power without taking us down with it.​

Storm tries to steer around it, it floats towards the jet. Jean’s face relaxes and the rock starts tumbling down. Everyone’s silent.

WOLVERINE:​

I need a cigar.​

Wolverine picks up the newspaper he was reading earlier and underneath is a National Science magazine.




EDIT: The "COMPUTER" dialogue is just storm reading stuff off of the computer

 

[gambitfire]

^Eh.............im confused i think things got to complex

 

[Asteroid-Man]

how so? Please explain so I can improve.

 

[gambitfire]

Well for starters i dunno what the hell is going on .

But that's my fault since i guess i missed anything that happened before.

Secondly (like my screenwriting teacher would say) you seem to have some unnecessary extra dialogue and while it is Wolverine its still an action sequence i wouldn't mind if he shut up a little . As for Storm she kinda has a gap and while i get that she's off doing something i can't help it think that w/e it is that is going on would immediatley draw her back. Umm if you PM a summary of what's going on i would like to give it my own little spin . Of course im not saying im better i just want to give it a try . But good job on capturing character (Need work on Storm though).

 

[AznBABYBANDIT]

aww, u read my mind...

 

[Asteroid-Man]

gambit, u could go ahead but I wont use it. I am writing my own script. You can go ahead. Just pm me it before u post it here. and AznBABYBANDIT who were u talkin to?

 

[Asteroid-Man]

Fade to another of the same magazine. Zoom out to a furry blue creature sitting and reading the book. The screen rotates. The blue man is in fact sitting on the ceiling.

INT. Secretary of Mutant Affairs, Dr. Henry (Hank) McCoy in his office.

His secretary walks in.

SECRETARY:​

Dr. McCoy, the meeting has already begun.​

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McCOY:​

Thank you secretary.​

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He jumps down and runs down the white house halls and two legs and two hands like an ape to the board room. The President along with others are seated.

McCOY:​

Mr. President,​

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Hank gives him a friendly nod and takes a seat to the Presidents left hand side. The President pulls out a document. He hands hank a page. And gestures to it.

McCOY:​

What’s this?​

PRESIDENT:​

Homeland security was tracking magneto.​

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TRASK:​

We got hits in Montreal, Detroit and Genoshia. NASDAQ lost his trace when he crossed the boarder but we did get the constellation prize.​

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He turns to a screen and hits a remote. They all look to the screen. Mystique is in a questioning room hand cuffed.

TRASK:​

We picked her up at the FDA of all places.​

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The President looks to Hank.

PRESIDENT:​

You know who she’s been imitating? Secretary Trask here.​

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Bolivar Trask’s face gets irritated.

TRASK:​

Well she won’t be doing that anymore. We’ve got her.​

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HANK:​

You think your prisons can hold her?​

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TRASK:​

We developed new prisons Hank. Plastic and mobile. We will be one step ahead this time.​

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MAN IN QUESTIONING ROOM:​

Where is Magneto?​

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Everyone looks to the screen.

MAN:​

Raven, I asked you a question.​

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Mystique isn’t looking him in the face.

MYSTIQUE:​

I don’t answer to my slave name.​

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MAN:​

Raven Darkholme, that’s your real name isn’t it? You had a family once. Or has he convinced you other wise?​

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Mystique angrily looks at him.

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MYSTIQUE:​

My family tried to kill me you pathetic meat sack!​

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MAN:​

Ok then Mystique, where is he?​

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He calmly looks at her. She shaft shifts to Magneto.

MAGNETO:​

In here. With us.​

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The man frustrated looks at her.

MAN:​

I don’t want to play games with you.​

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Mystique turns into the man’s imitation now.

IMMITATION:​

You don’t want to play games with me?​

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MAN:​

Tell me, where is Magneto?!​

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Mystique leans forward.

IMMITAION:​

You wanna know where he is?​

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She slams her head into the Man’s, kicks her chair back into a guard, shape shifts and kicks another. She now jumps over the first Man and chokes him with the hand cuff chains. She hisses in his ear.

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MYSTIQUE:​

Homo Sapient.​

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Bolivar Trask shuts off the TV and everyone faces the President once again.

HANK:​

You know, having her will only provoke Magneto. But at least it does give us some diplomatic leverage.​

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He looks at the President who doesn’t seem to care.

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HANK:​

But that’s not why you called me here, is it?​

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PRESIDENT:​

No, it isn’t.​

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He hands Hank the rest of the folder he was holding. He opens it. There’s a picture of a young boy about 14 years old.

PRESIDENT:​

It’s what she stole from the FDA.​

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Hank reads on. The logo for “Worthington Labs” is in the corner.

HANK:​

Dear lord, is it viable?​

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PRESIDENT:​

We believe it is.​

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HANK:​

You realize the level of impact this will have on the mutant community?​

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PRESIDENT:​

Yes I do. That’s precisely why we need some of your… diplomacy now.​

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HANK:​

This isn’t diplomacy. This is supremacy.​

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PRESIDENT:​

Hank listen-​

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HANK:​

Good day Mr. President.​

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Hank storms out of the room.

 

[Asteroid-Man]

INT. A guard walking in a narrow hallway.
The President’s voice is heard.

PRESIDENT:
Let me out of here!

He is locked up. The guard faces him unimpressed.


PRESIDENT:
I am the President of the United States! Let me out of here this instant!

GUARD:
Oh Mr. President… Shut up!

The guard turns around and an echoing noise is heard. There is now a little girl where Mystique was once standing.

GIRL:
Let me out of here! Please!

She is crying. The guard turns to face her.

GUARD:
Keep it up. I’ll shoot you in the face bi**h.

He has a plastic gun ready. The girl morphs into Magneto.

MAGNETO:
Quite a gun you have there.

He tries to gain control of the gun with magnetism. He morphs into Mystique.

MYSTIQUE:
Plastic. You’ve learned.

GUARD:
Magneto can’t save you now.

There’s a smirk on the guards face.

MYSTIQUE:
When I get out of here, I’m going to kill you.

GUARD:
And after a hard days worth you can go home to your two children.

The guard chuckles and walks away as an angry Mystique is seen in the background.

INT. *BAMF*
Nightcrawler has teleported into Rogue’s room.

ROGUE:
Mr. Wagner! You scared me!

NIGHTCRAWLER:
Please Rogue, call me Kurt. So, I here you vanted to see me?

ROGUE:
Well, you’ve been like an older brother to me since you arrived and I need your advice again.

NIGHTCRAWLER:
So vhat can I do for you?

ROGUE:
Well there’s this guy.

NIGHTCRAWLER:
Bobby,

ROGUE:
Ya, he hasn’t been to much into our relationship lately. I think it’s because of… my curse.

NIGHTCRAWLER:
Listen Rogue, vhat you have is a gift. If Bobby can’t understand that then he obviously isn’t meant for you. There must be someone out there made for you.

ROGUE:
Kurt, that’s the thing, there is no one! Every boy I touch has had their energy drained!

NIGHTCRAWLER:
Mutation is very unpredictable. For all ve know the energy draining could just be a phase. I didn’t discover my teleportation powers until years later. And even if you are stuck with draining energy, there has to be another mutant who can let off energy.

Rogue sat still.

NIGHTCRAWLER:
I vill let you t’ink on that.

ROGUE:
Thanks Kurt.

*BAMF*

INT. Xavier is having a class with his students.



KITTY:
So, theoretically speaking; if a psychic was to escape an accident leading to death, they could “teleport” their consciousness into a person whose brain dead?

XAVIER:
Precisely. Let me show you all something my colleague, Moira McTaggert put together. Switch, the TV please.

A teenage mutant with glasses blinks and the TV turns on. There’s a woman standing in a lab with an unconscious person in the back.

MOIRA:
Here at Muire Island, Scotland we are doing studies on how to save people. So far we have only had successful tests with psychic mutants. The people either donated their bodies to this study. We are also working on some other, classified ways to obtain bodies.

XAVIER:
Thank you, Switch.

The child blinks and the TV turns off. Xavier feels something.

XAVIER:
Class dismissed.


INT. Medical lab.

Xavier is waiting and then suddenly Cyclops, Storm and Wolverine run in while bringing Jean on the cart-bed.

CYCLOPS:
Professor,

XAVIER:
Storm explained everything. I need you out. All of you. Now.

They all leave, the door closes behind them and Xavier starts hooking up equipment to Jean’s forehead. He then puts on a helmet. The professor closes his eyes. Jeans eyes go black. Camera pans into Jean’s eyes.

INT. the astral plane.
Xavier’s body is floating in space.

XAVIER:
The astral plane. The Phoenix’s mind and soul.

Jean’s voice echoes.

JEAN:
Xavier,

XAVIER:
Phoenix! What have you done with Jean? Why have you returned?

PHOENIX:
Jean? Oh I keep her around. As for why I have returned? Well after being imprisoned in my host’s body for 20 years I thought it was time for revenge. And what a better time then while Jean was unconscious?

XAVIER:
How did you survive?

PHOENIX:
The psychic blocs you set were fine for a young mutant but Jean’s mutation grew stronger at Liberty Isle and so did I. I held my strength for a good moment. When the mass of water collapsed on Jean, I put a psychic cocoon around her body to preserve it for me. Now I the Phoenix have returned to the world once again and when I wake up the fun begins.

Xavier was knocked out of Jean’s mind.

INT. Xavier, Storm and Wolverine in Xavier’s office.

STORM:
So what is the Phoenix exactly?

XAVIER:
The Phoenix is a great amount of power. It’s a spirit, a force. It travels the world seeking for a new host whenever the last one dies. When it is un-inhabiting a body, the Phoenix acts as a guardian against injustice. It is a miracle worker. But when it finds a host, it takes advantage of all the new emotions it has never felt before. It’s uncontrollable. But what fears me the most is that we do not know how to stop it.

WOLVERINE:
So that’s it? You have all this information then suddenly you give us a brick wall?

XAVIER:
You must understand Logan, I have collected what information I could using Cerebro. I had to concentrate on the inhabited hosts and piece together information.

STORM:
So couldn’t you have concentrated harder?

WOLVERINE:
If he wanted to kill the person, sure.

Storm looks at Wolverine confused.

WOLVERINE:
I’ll explain later.

Kitty walks through the door. Wolverine is caught of guard. Kitty stares at him.

KITTY:
Oh right, knock knock.

WOLVERINE:
Come in,

Kitty smiles.

KITTY:
Professor, there’s a mutant named Henry McCoy waiting for you in the common room.

STORM:
Hank!?

XAVIER:
Thank you, Kitty.

 

[Asteroid-Man]

CONT'D
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INT. Glasses are being held in front of a painting.
Pan out to a furry blue hand. A voice is heard.

STORM:​

Hank!​

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Pan back to Henry “the Beast” McCoy now hugging Storm with Wolverine and Xavier entering through the back.

BEAST:​

Ororo!​

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STORM:​

I love what you’ve done with your hair!​

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BEAST:​

You too!​

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XAVIER:​

Hank, it’s been a long time.​

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BEAST:​

Professor! Thank you for giving me your time.​

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XAVIER:​

Hank, you are always welcome here! You are apart of this place.​

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Wolverine is waiting by the doorway still.

WOLVERINE:​

Who invited the blue man group?​

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The Beast gnarled at him and a little roar was heard.

STORM:​

This is Hank McCoy. He was one of the first X-Men Logan. Even before me.​

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BEAST:​

Yes well, that was a long time ago.​

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XAVIER:​

He’s now the Secretary of Mutant Affairs.​

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Wolverine takes a seat on the desk.

WOLVERINE:​

Right a secretary. Nice suit. You always wear that when you go to school?​

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Beast was starting to get annoyed.

BEAST:​

Actually, I just came back from a meeting with the President.​

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STORM:​

Any news on Magneto?​

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BEAST:​

Well, he is still hiding but the officials did manage to capture Mystique when she tried to steal info from the Pharmaceutical Department.​

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WOLVERINE:​

Thanks for the news, bub.​

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Xavier looks at Logan.

XAVIER:​

Magneto’s not the problem, is he?​

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Xavier is now looking at Beast

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BEAST:​

Actually it’s what Mystique tried to steal. It was a report on something that Worthington Labs is working on. It can supposedly suppress the mutant x-gene. They are calling it a cure.​

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STORM:​

They won’t to cure us?​

​

XAVIER:​

Have you met with Warren yet?​

​

WOLVERINE:​

Am I missing something?​

​

STORM:​

The owner of Worthington Labs, Warren Worthington II sent his mutant son here when he was about 10.​

​

WOLVERINE:​

So he wants to cure us when his son is a mutant too? Sounds like a genuine Stryker to me.​

​

XAVIER:​

Logan, we don’t necessarily know if he is testing on mutants.​

​

BEAST:​

Actually the source of the cure is a mutant. I have a meeting with him this afternoon.​

​

Xavier pauses. His face emotionless.

XAVIER:​

They’re announcing it now.​

​

 

[Asteroid-Man]

INT. Living room, all the students are watching the television.
Worthington Labs can be seen behind a Persian Woman.

​

KAVITA:​

Ladies and Gentlemen, we are now facing a critical moment in humanity where those who are different are being shunned from society. Here with us today is the brilliant man who has learned to solve this problem. Dr. Warren Worthington the Second!​

​

A group of people begin clapping.

In the room Colossus whispers in Kitty’s ear.

COLOSSUS:​

This cannot be good.​

​

WARTHINGTON:​

We have finally discovered the answer to uniting mutants and humans alike. People of the world I proudly present to you the cure to mutation. The end to all the prejudice. My fellow American’s say hello to a new future, shining brighter then ever before.​

​

INT. Common Room
Cyclops storms into the room.

SCOTT:​

Who would want this cure?​

​

STORM:​

My point exactly. There’s nothing wrong with any of us!​

​

*SNIKT* Wolverine has let out his three claws on his right hand and looks at them.

WOLVERINE:​

Right, ‘cause I expect everyone to understand a guy with indestructible knives in his fist.​

​

XAVIER:​

Logan’s right.​

​

Storm and Cyclops look at him confused.

CYCLOPS:​

What?​

​

XAVIER:​

Mankind is simply un-informed.​

​

Cyclops looks at Beast and squints.

​

CYCLOPS:​

Beast?​

​

BEAST:​

Hello Scott.​

​

They hug.

BEAST:​

It’s been a long time.​

​

CYCLOPS:​

It really has been.​

​

Wolverine’s watch beeps.

WOLVERINE:​

Look at the time. Two O’clock already!​

​

BEAST:​

I best be going soon. Professor, is there anything I could help you with?​

​

XAVIER:​

Actually there is.​

​

Cyclops and Storm begin to walk out.

STORM:​

Alone, Logan.​

​

WOLVERINE:​

Oh, right.​

​

They lave.

BEAST:​

So, where’s Jean?​

​

XAVIER:​

That’s what I wanted you to help me with. The Phoenix has returned.​

​

BEAST:​

How did this happen?​

​

​

​

XAVIER:​

Last year, there was an accident. We all thought Jean was dead, but then Scott, Logan and Storm found her alive. When she awoke, she was the Phoenix. I currently have her stable, but I am afraid that won’t last long.​

​

Beast looks at him stunned.

XAVIER:​

Hank, I think she is going to kill me.​

​

BEAST:​

Professor that isn’t poss-​

​

XAVIER:​

I need your help with something. I hear you know of the research my friend Moira is working on.​

​

Silent.

​

BEAST:​

You think it is going to work?​

​

XAVIER:​

I have reason believe so.​

​

BEAST:​

Let’s just hope Jean can finally rid herself of the Phoenix.​

​

 

[Asteroid-Man]

(If I saw this next scene on the screen I would freak)
INT. A church at night time. “Mutants against the Cure” is written on the billboard.
A man is standing at a Podium.

MAN:​

The cure is voluntary! We aren’t being forced into doing this! It’s up to us, the mutants to help them understand what we really are.​

​

Toad is sitting against the wall in the corner.

TOAD:​

They want to exterminate us!​

​

MAN:​

No one is talking about extermination here!​

​

A voice is heard.

​

MAGNETO:​

No one ever talks about it.​

​

He stands with Pyro to his side.

MAGNETO:​

They just do it.​

​

He begins walking up the hall.

MAGNETO:​

And you all go on with your lives, ignoring the signs. Only when the air is still and the night has fallen you realize it is to late for organizing comities. The homo-sapiens will draw first blood my brothers. Now there is only one question you must answer.​

“Who will you stand with”?​

​

Magneto and Pyro walk of stage. Toad now joins them walking down the isle. They are stopped by a man with long metal boots and trench coat on. He puts a metal staff in there way. His head is looking to the floor.

TRENCH COAT MAN:​

You talk pretty tough for a guy in a cape.​

​

TOAD:​

Do you know who you’re talking to?​

​

His hand has a ball of fire in it. The man pulls out a card engulfed in purple flames. He was known as Gambit.

GAMBIT:​

Do you?​

​

A dark figure looks down upon them from the roof, his eyes glowing in the dark. Pyro winks and the fire from the card burn the card completely. Pyro laughs.

PYRO:​

Got any more magic tricks up your sleeve?​

​

Gambit grabs Pyro’s hand and it starts to glow.

GAMBIT:​

That should do it, mon amie.​

​

The gas emitter blows and Pyro’s chest is on fire. The other mutants get up. Magneto motions his hand from Pyro’s chest to Gambit. A metal disc rips off from under Pyro’s shirt and goes towards Gambit. *BAMF* Gambit is grabbed from behind by a dark figure and is now gone. *BAMF* Gambit and the dark figure are now seated on the support of the ceiling, hidden in the darkness. Gambit whispers to Nightcrawler.

GAMBIT:​

Who are you?​

​

NIGHTCRAWLER:​

Nightcrawler, I like to come here vhen I am confused. In this case the cure but I didn’t expect to find anyone else here.​

​

GAMBIT:​

Merci.​

​

Pyro’s fire has now been turned off by himself. The man at the podium begins to laugh while he is smoking a cigarette.

TOAD:​

What’s so funny?​

​

MAN:​

That guy looks like Mongolian Barbecue!​

​

PYRO:​

Funny. Your turn.​

​

Fire bursts out from the cigarette and onto the man’s face. Magneto and the other two begin to walk out when they are stopped by a group of mutants. One with an eye-patch (Calisto) stops them.

CALISTO:​

Your not going anywhere old man.​

​

The other mutants begin to surround them. Another group of mutants stand behind Magneto. They all have the Omega letter tattooed on themselves.

MAGNETO:​

If you insist.​

​

Magneto motions towards the organ and scraps of metal are thrown at the eye-patched girl and her friends.

CALISTO:​

Spike, Masque; take care of the organ, I got Magneto. Everyone else fight!​

​

Spike (a mutant totally covered in wooden armor) launches wooden spikes from all over his body at the scraps of metal and hits most of them. Masque turns into a Dinosaur and knocks the rest of the organ out of the room. Nightcrawler *BAMFS* himself and Gambit back down. Gambit runs into battle throwing cards and kicking butt with his staff. Nightcrawler helps the man from the podium whose face was badly burnt.

NIGHTCRAWLER:​

I suppose you don’t have aloe Vera on you by any chance?​

​

The man’s hand changes into a small compartment and there is a vile there. He takes the it and opens it. There’s a lotion there. He rubs it on his face and the burns heal instantly. He now turns his hand into a metal tube with red lights around it.

MAN:​

I’m Forge.​

​

Forge runs out into battle and begins shooting powerful blasts from his tube/hand. Gambit yells over to Nightcrawler.

GAMBIT:​

You goin’ help ou quoi?​

​

NIGHTCRAWLER:​

Not in ze house of God.​

​

GAMBIT:​

That green mutant blew the cross out of here, Magneto’s organ maneuver busted all the disciple windows and the Bible was stolen. I do not believe this is still a house of God.​

​

Nightcrawler stares at Gambit. *BAMF* Nightcrawler lands on a Omega Mutant behind Gambit.

NIGHTCRAWLER:​

I got your back.​

​

Magneto is still using craps of metal to defend himself. He was been hit a few times and is now weakened. Calisto sneaks up behind him and launches tens of tentacles from her shoulders and wraps them around Magneto. She squeezes hard and a crack is heard. A big fat mutant goes to throw Calisto but she quickly turns and dodges it. Another mutant with a glass dome around his head kicks the ground and it shakes and knocks Calisto to the floor. A pale skinned mutant launches metal tentacles from his wrists and attaches them to Calisto. He know throws her across the room and into a wall. Magneto holds his ribs. And looks at the others. They name themselves off.

GLASS DOME MUTANT:​

I’m Avalanche, that big guy’s Blob and the white guy’s Red.​

​

​

MAGNETO:​

Hmm, come with me and bring all the mutants you can. Toad Pyro we’re leaving.​

​

TOAD:​

Sabretooth, let’s go!​

​

A tall hairy mutant plows through the other mutants and stops at Magneto.

SABRETOOTH:​

Magneto,​

​

MAGNETO:​

Sabretooth. Ready yourselves.​

​

Magneto magnetically pulls the church’s giant cross from outside and pulls it in front of him and the others. Magneto stands on it and the Omega Mutants and Brotherhood fallow. Magneto raises the large metal cross from the ground. Mutants from below are shooting and throwing things at them. The stuff being shot and thrown have now pierced a hole in the ceiling. Magneto pulls the cross out of the whole and they are now floating over the church. He points his palm at the church and clenches his fist. The entire church collapses.

 

[Asteroid-Man]

INT. Rubble is seen everywhere.
*BAMF* Nightcrawler is out from under the debris. Boom, an explosion and out comes Gambit and Forge. They run over to Nightcrawler who is know kneeling in front of the (still standing) alter. He is sad. Forge puts his arm on Nightcrawler’s shoulder.

GAMBIT:​

We best start helping these personnes back to health.​

​

INT. Gambit and Forge are helping up other unconscious mutants while Nightcrawler is speaking with Wolverine on the X-Communicator.

WOLVERINE:​

Magneto? You’re sure?​

​

NIGHTCRAWLER:​

Yes, and apparently he was reunited with some of his old friends and he met some new ones. The all left.​

​

WOLVERINE:​

How many of them?​

​

NIGHTCRAWLER:​

About fifty?​

​

WOLVERINE:​

They are gonna spread the message and get more, trust me. So you will be back by next week for sure?​

​

NIGHTCRAWLER:​

Hopefully sooner if the other mutants want to help clean up.​

​

WOLVERINE:​

And by the way, I think you’re ‘brother’ dropped by here.​

​

INT. Beast and Kavita are walking down a metal hallway.

KAVITA:​

We will let him go once we learn how to duplicate samples quicker.​

​

BEAST:​

You said his parents are dead? Let me handle his arrangements after you are done with him.​

​

Kavita stops at a white door.

KAVITA:​

Here we are.​

BEAST:​

What is the range of his ability?​

​

KAVITA:​

You’ll see.​

​

Beast walks into a large white room filled with toys and games. A green mutant, around the age of seven or eight is playing video games.

KAVITA:​

Leech, someone is here to see you.​

​

The boy turns around to face Beast. Beast walks up to shake his hand.

BEAST:​

Hello. I’m-​

​

He stops himself when he notices his hand is no longer blue, big and hairy. He looks at his hand.

BEAST:​

You have an amazing gift Leech. Thank you.​

​

They close the door and walk out.

INT. Magneto’s lair.
Mutants are sitting around, testing their powers on objects. Pyro, Avalanche, Sabretooth, Blob and Red are standing behind a seated Magneto. Toad hops in front of Magneto.

TOAD:​

I found the guy you want. He’s in the corner. His name’s search.​

​

MAGNETO:​

How ironic. Bring him to me.​

Toad brings an old lady to Magneto.

MAGNETO:​

My dear lady, can I have some of your assistance?​

​

Her face rejuvenates. She is now a beautiful young woman.

SEARCH:​

I hear you need me to find someone for you.​

​

 

[Asteroid-Man]

INT. Mystique in her cell.
Close-up on Mystiques ear. She smiles. She looks over to the guard who is now asleep. She shape shifts into a snake and lands on the floor. She makes a loud hissing noise. The guard wakes up and looks over to Mystiques cell. He doesn’t see Mystique so he goes over to the cell. The snake slithers from under the guard’s feet and she morphs into her blue self again. She quickly grabs the guard’s head and twists it.

MYSTIQUE:​

I told you so.​

​

She takes a clip board from off the wall and begins to read it.

INT. Driver of the mobile prison looks out past the guarding federal police SUV’s.

DRIVER:​

What the hell is that?​

​

On the road now stand’s Magneto, Pyro, Toad, Sabretooth, Avalanche, Blob and Red. Magneto motions towards the car and sense no metal.

​

MAGNETO:​

Avalanche, now.​

​

Avalanche slams the ground and earthquake forms, the SUV in the front flips back into the mobile prison and the one in the back rolls off the road. Pyro launches fire and both the SUVs. They all walk inside the prison and see guards awaiting them. Blob smiles at them and slams them all together. From the back of the prison outcomes Mystique with the clipboard.

MAGNETO:​

Read off the guest list will you dear?​

Mystique walks to the first cell.

MYSTIQUE:​

This man robbed fifteen banks… at once.​

​

Pyro melts the lock and out comes a man who then multiplies into three.

MAGNETO:​

I could use a man of your talents.​

​

He smiles.

MULTIPLE MEN:​

I’m in.​

​

They walk to the next cell.

MYSTIQUE:​

If he builds up enough momentum, nothing can stop him. He calls himself the Juggernaut and was previously known as-​

​

MAGNETO:​

Cain Marko?​

​

PYRO:​

How do you know this mutant?​

​

TOAD:​

He’s no mutant. His suite gives him his power. If his helmet is taken off, he is vulnerable to mutant powers targeting his head or mind. I always wondered what happened to him.​

​

Magneto looks to Blob who busts open the plastic cell. Juggernaut is bolted to the back half of the cell.

JUGGERNAUT:​

You kill Chuckles yet?​

​

Pyro looks at Toad.

TOAD:​

Did I forget to mention he’s Xavier’s step brother?​

​

Sabretooth looks back and sees a Guard is still conscious and aiming a cure gun at Magneto. He roars and jumps in the way. Pyro turns around and burns the guard to ashes. Sabretooth took a cure dart to the head. Sabretooth’s body shrinks from eight feet to six feet and his hair and nails grow shorter. Mystique feels for a pulse.

MYSTIQUE:​

He’s dead.​

​

MAGNETO:​

How unfortunate, he was a great warrior.


​

More to come soon!

 

[LastSunrise1981]

It's been a long time since this has been bumped and I edited some new rewrites of mine to fit certain scenes.

::This is the scene after Storm and Logan finish the Danger Room session, which results in Storm seeing Scott grieve over Jean::

Scott-::Sitting in the bedroom. Flashbacks cue to Jean saving the X-Men and him watching her die:: Jean.....

Storm- Scott?

Scott-:: Doesn't answer Storm ::

Storm- Scott, I know this isn't a good time. But we just finished the Danger Room drills and I feel we need your expertise more than ever.

Scott- I still don't understand why she left the plane. Why did she sacrifice herself?

Storm-::Sits down next to Scott and puts a hand on his shoulder:: She made a choice Scott. She made her stand chose that through it all, she would do whatever it took to save those she cared about. You've had her all of your life, that's more than some will ever have in their lifetime.

Scott- I know. But sometimes it isn't enough. ::Grabs his bags and storms out of the room::

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::Trask and the President having their meeting::

Trask- Mr. President, I've come to realize that this mutant problem is becoming much worse than we anticipated.

President- Magneto has been on every single media outlet issuing threats of terror involving death, strife, and the loss of innocent lives. We cannot let him do this to the people.

Trask- You know I agree, which is why I feel it's necessary to bring up the new mutant cure that we've been working on.

President- Trask, I'm not going to go over this with you again. You realize what kind of a situation this puts me in.

Trask- Well you know what needs to be done. Quite frankly the "cure" that you and Worthington approve of is not going to do anything to solve the problem. In order to solve the problem, you need to extract it and in order to extract it and eradicate it is to bring the war to them. Mr. President here we are in a new era where we don't know if we can co-exist with these people. We can't talk to them, we can't reason with them, and I'll be damned if I'm going to live in fear of one day encountering one who wants to do harm to our country.

President- Trask,I approve of this, but I am washing my hands of the blood that will be spilled.

Trask- You can wash your hands of the guilt and confusion all you want. It's time to show them the same no mercy, as they have shown us.

::This scene is basically hinting at the Sentinels and the President feeling guilt over the decision he's made::
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::Rogue watching the cure on tv and going to meet Xavier, Logan, Beast, and Storm::

Rogue- Is it true, they can cure us?

Xavier- Yes, Rogue it appears to be true.

Storm- No, they can't cure us. There's nothing wrong with you Rogue. There's nothing wrong with any of us. You are just as special as someone who isn't a mutant. You have something to offer just like everyone else in this life.

Rogue- Storm, you don't know what it's like. You walk down the street and you see a husband/wife hugging, kissing, and holding each other close. Or to be able to shake someones hand without fear of killing them.

Xavier- Marie. I know how you feel. We all want to fit in and all want to be accepted in some fashion. But just as Storm said, you are special and have a lot to offer. However, in the end it is your decision, just remember that no matter what is said or done you'll always be a part of this family.

::Beast looks towards Wolverine and towards Rogue::

Beast- Marie....I want you to know that much like you I understand what it's like to want something so dear and precious. I look in the mirror and remember the days when I had normal hands, a normal face, and a life where I could do as I please without receiving disgusted looks. But then I realized that no matter what is said about me or done, nothing anyone can say or do will take away the accomplishments. You are special in your way and there is absolutely nothing wrong with you, my friend.

::Hank gives a slight smile to Rogue::
--------------------------------------------------------------------------

::The speech with the X-Men before the final battle. Only this time it has Cyclops giving the speech::

Beast- Hard to believe this used to fit me.

Cyclops- Magneto has an army that is making their way to Alcatraz.

Beast- Can you estimate how many he has Scott?

Cyclops- Thousands including Jean.

Beast- His power has limits, hers do not.

Iceman- Scott, there's only 7 of us.

Scott- Yes, we're outnumbered. I'm not going to lie to you. When we lost the Professor there was a lot of confusion, strife, sadness, and hopelessness. But if we don't make our stand now then everything he stood for will die with him. I made a promise to Professor and I intend to keep that promise. I'm not going to let his dream die nor will I let our dream die. Are you?

Iceman- ::Shakes his head:: No. I won't.

Cyclops- Then we stand together now and forever as X-Men.

Rogue- Count me in as well sugahs.

Angel- Me as well.

Beast- ::Looks over to Rogue:: What made you change your mind child?

Rogue- Remembering what you told me and listening to Scott helped me make my stand I am making it now.

Scott- ::Nods and looks to the other X-Men:: Let's go.

::Wolverine looks Scott in the eye as they meet face to face before heading to the plane::

Logan- Scott, it's at times like this that I remember why you're in charge.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------

Vilya provided this amazing artwork of Cyclops at the final battle.

::This is after the X-Men make their entrances at Alcatraz and Scott, being the leader, is the last one to come out of the plane. The camera would go into a close up of his visor and then pan behind him as he views the Brotherhood from the plane::

::He then would jump from the plane shooting his optic beams into the ground and landing on one knee::

Cyclops-::Slowly walking towards the X-Men as the fog settles in and the rain begins to fall, he looks over to the soldiers:: You men cover the doors. Everyone get together and hold this line!

::He stands with his allies as they make their last stand and the visual of them lined up would be the same, except Cyclops would be front and center::

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::Magneto releasing Mystique from the prison scene and encountering Juggernaut::

Magneto- Cain Marko? I know that name.

::Magneto opens the door::

Magneto- Hello Cain.

Juggernaut- Who in the hell are you buddy?

Magneto- That's not important right now. What is important is what I have to offer you. I offer you freedom and something that you most definitely want in life.

Juggernaut- There's nothing the Juggernaut wants from you old man.

Magneto- Charles Xavier.

Juggernaut- ::His face becomes stern and he glares at Magneto:: I take it you know that little piece of trash of a half-brother?

Magneto- Quite well as a matter of fact. How about a reunion?

Juggernaut- ::Smiles::
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This is pretty much what I have at the moment. I'm still working on some more rewrites of scenes that I've been working on.

 

[storm-x-fan]

This is our chance!

To rewrite scenes the way they should have been!

For example:

Xavier and Storm in the hall.

Xavier: Storm, I haven't thought of you as my student in years.

Storm: Professor.

Xavier: In fact, I wanted to tell you that you've done very well filling in for Scott these past few months.

Storm: How is he?

Charles: He took Jean's death so hard. He was planning on proposing to her when she died.

Storm: Really?

Xavier: Yes. But Scott is strong. Stronger than anyone gives him credit for. He'll come around.. with the help of his friends.

Storm: Scott's not just a friend, Professor. He's family.

Xavier's face changes.

Storm: What? What is it? What's wrong?


THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT. SHOWING THAT THEY GIVE A DAMN! AND NOT GIVING UP ON SCOTT!

Rewrite your scenes here!

AND PLEASE LET'S KEEP IT SERIOUS, NO SILLY JOKEY STUFF.

Can't wait to read'em.

gr8 dialogues.

 

[storm-x-fan]

It's been a long time since this has been bumped and I edited some new rewrites of mine to fit certain scenes.

::This is the scene after Storm and Logan finish the Danger Room session, which results in Storm seeing Scott grieve over Jean::

Scott-::Sitting in the bedroom. Flashbacks cue to Jean saving the X-Men and him watching her die:: Jean.....

Storm- Scott?

Scott-:: Doesn't answer Storm ::

Storm- Scott, I know this isn't a good time. But we just finished the Danger Room drills and I feel we need your expertise more than ever.

Scott- I still don't understand why she left the plane. Why did she sacrifice herself?

Storm-::Sits down next to Scott and puts a hand on his shoulder:: She made a choice Scott. She made her stand chose that through it all, she would do whatever it took to save those she scared about. You've had her all of your life, that's more than some will ever have in their lifetime.

Scott- I know. But sometimes it isn't enough. ::Grabs his bags and storms out of the room::

--------------------------------------------------------------------------

::Trask and the President having their meeting::

Trask- Mr. President, I've come to realize that this mutant problem is becoming much worse than we anticipated.

President- Magneto has been on every single media outlet issuing threats of terror involving death, strife, and the loss of innocent lives. We cannot let him do this to the people.

Trask- You know I agree, which is why I feel it's necessary to bring up the new mutant cure that we've been working on.

President- Trask, I'm not going to go over this with you again. You realize what kind of a situation this puts me in.

Trask- Well you know what needs to be done. Quite frankly the "cure" that you and Worthington approve of is not going to do anything to solve the problem. In order to solve the problem, you need to extract it and in order to extract it and eradicate it is to bring the war to them. Mr. President here we are in a new era where we don't know if we can co-exist with these people. We can't talk to them, we can't reason with them, and I'll be damned if I'm going to live in fear of one day encountering one who wants to do harm to our country.

President- Trask,I approve of this, but I am washing my hands of the blood that will be spilled.

Trask- You can wash your hands of the guilt and confusion all you want. It's time to show them the same no mercy, as they have shown us.

::This scene is basically hinting at the Sentinels and the President feeling guilt over the decision he's made::
--------------------------------------------------------------------------
::Rogue watching the cure on tv and going to meet Xavier, Logan, Beast, and Storm::

Rogue- Is it true, they can cure us?

Xavier- Yes, Rogue it appears to be true.

Storm- No, they can't cure us. There's nothing wrong with you Rogue. There's nothing wrong with any of us. You are just as special as someone who isn't a mutant is. You have something to offer just like everyone else in this life.

Rogue- Storm, you don't know what it's like. You walk down the street and you see a husband/wife hugging, kissing, and holding each other close. Or to be able to shake someones hand without fear of killing them.

Xavier- Marie. I know how you feel. We all want to fit in and all want to be accepted in some fashion. But just as Storm said, you are special and have a lot to offer. However, in the end it is your decision, just remember that no matter what is said or done you'll always be a part of this family.

::Beast looks towards Wolverine and towards Rogue::

Beast- Marie....I want you to know that much like you I understand what it's like to want something so dear and precious. I look in the mirror and remember the days when I had normal hands, a normal face, and a life where I could do as I please without receiving disgusted looks. But then I realized that no matter what is said about me or done, nothing anyone can say or do will take away the accomplishments. You are special in your way and there is absolutely nothing wrong with you, my friend.

::Hank gives a slight smile to Rogue::
--------------------------------------------------------------------------

::The speech with the X-Men before the final battle. Only this time it has Cyclops giving the speech::

Beast- Hard to believe this used to fit me so good.

Cyclops- Magneto has an army that is making their way to Alcatraz.

Beast- Can you estimate how many he has Scott?

Cyclops- Thousands including Jean.

Beast- His power has limits, hers do not.

Iceman- Scott, there's only 7 of us.

Scott- Yes, we're outnumbered. I'm not going to lie to you. When we lost the Professor there was a lot of confusion, strife, sadness, and hopelessness. But if we don't make our stand now then everything he stood for will die with him. I made a promise to Professor and I intend to keep that promise. I'm not going to let his dream die nor will I let our dream die. Are you?

Iceman- ::Shakes his head:: No. I won't.

Cyclops- Then we stand together now and forever as X-Men.

Rogue- Count me in as well sugahs.

Angel- Me as well.

Beast- ::Looks over to Rogue:: What made you change your mind child?

Rogue- Remembering what you told me and listening to Scott helped me make my stand I am making it now.

Scott- ::Nods and looks to the other X-Men:: Let's go.

::Wolverine looks Scott in the eye as they meet face to face before heading to the plane::

Logan- Scott, it's at times like this that I remember why you're in charge.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------

Vilya provided this amazing artwork of Cyclops at the final battle.

::This is after the X-Men make their entrances at Alcatraz and Scott, being the leader, is the last one to come out of the plane. The camera would go into a close up of his visor and then pan behind him as he views the Brotherhood from the plane::

::He then would jump from the plane shooting his optic beams into the ground and landing on one knee::

Cyclops-::Slowly walking towards the X-Men as the fog settles in and the rain begins to fall, he looks over to the soldiers:: You men cover the doors. Everyone get together and hold this line!

::He stands with his allies as they make their last stand and the visual of them lined up would be the same, except Cyclops would be front and center::


This is pretty much what I have at the moment. I'm still working on some more rewrites of scenes that I've been working on.

^^nice.

 

[storm-x-fan]

all dialogues in this thread are superb!! only if they were used in the movie....

 

[LastSunrise1981]

:: Juggernaut chasing Kitty through the lab tearing through the walls::

Juggernaut- ::Crashing through the final wall cornering Leech and Kitty:: I'm the wrong guy to play hide and seek with.

Kitty- Who's hiding? ********!

Juggernaut- :repares to charge when suddenly a female voice from behind is heard::

Rogue- Hiya Sugah! What's all this fuss about now?

Kitty- Rogue, what are you doing?!

Rogue- Kitty, I need you and the little one to go as far away from here as possible. I'll handle the big lug here.

Juggernaut- ::Growls and punches Rogue in the face sending her face back violently, when all of a sudden he starts to shudder and get weak::

Rogue- ::Smiles through his fist:: Is that the best you got sweetheart? ::Rogue pulls her first back and punches Juggernaut sending him through a wall::

::Rogue follows Juggernaut through the wall::

Rogue- You know I don't approve of big men hitting on innocent girls like myself. But then again, you're not a man since you're getting your ass kicked by the same little girl sugah! ::Rogue picks up Juggernaut and throws him through another wall::
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::Cue the scene to Jean destroying everything in sight::

Scott- ::Looks to Logan and Storm:: I'm the only one who can stop her.

Logan- Scott, you can't go against her.

Scott- Logan, this isn't your call to make. Go with Storm and get everyone to safety now!

::Scott watching Jean destroy everything around him::

Scott- Jean.....I know you're still there.

::Suddenly a grimace of pain is seen on his face falling to one knee and he slowly starts demolecularizing just as Xavier did. Suddenly he stands up straight and begins his walk through the flames to get to Jean::

Jean as Phoenix- You would die for them?!

Scott- ::He stands before Jean stern and his skin along with his X-uniform intact:: For them and for you Jean.......

Jean- ::Starts to become herself again::

Scott- For you and for them......

Jean- ::Starts crying:: Save me Scott......Please.

Scott-::Balds his fists as tears start streaming down his face. His hands go to his visor and he takes it off with his eyes closed:: I love you Jean.......... Forgive me please.....

Jean- :hoenix beginning to take over once more:: I love you too Scott.

Scott- :::Crying still:: Please forgive me......::His eyes open which releases a powerful optic blast killing Jean in the process::

Jean- ::Falls down into his arms::

Scott- No.....No........No..

::Scott lifts up his head opening his eyes screaming in rage, sadness, and guilt as a powerful optic blast shoots into the night sky::

 

[LastSunrise1981]

Bump. Just in case anyone wants to add their scenes/rewrites or wanted to look at it for old times sake.