I think this MSN TV blog is pretty accurate with its critique of episode 10:
Stupidity Abounds on 'Heroes'
Wow. It was amazing to see "Heroes" go from one of its best episodes ever to one of its worst. It's like the writing team is the literay equivalent of Bears quarterback Rex Grossman. One day, they're brilliant, and the next, it's nothing but fumbles and interceptions. Pretty much everything that happened required one or more people to be phenomenally stupid, inconsistent or otherwise unbelievable.
Adam and Peter team up. Peter's trying to stop the Shanti virus, while Adam's secretly trying to spread it. They get a lead on one of the Company's former geneticists, Victoria Pratt. She falsely tells Peter that the virus is in New Mexico. Because she figures that he might be working with Adam. So knowing that Adam's a regenerator, she shoots him in the body. Sure, she might have missed with a head shot attempt, but even so, she's got a gun for a second shot and he doesn't. Then she wastes time monologuing about how only a head shot would kill him. Yeah, that makes sense. Later, she points out to Peter that Adam's trying to spread the virus. Adam says, no, it's the Company that's trying to do it. However could Peter possibly tell the truth? If only he could read minds...oh wait, he can. Not that he needed to when Adam guns her down on a pretty thin pretext. And then spitefully throws down a picture of her marked with blood. Too bad Peter's clued out for all this.
In Hiro's thread, he flashes back to the 1970s and gets to see the events that led Adam to be locked up. It turns out the Company had a super-lethal version of the Shanti virus way back then that Adam was trying to release. His motive: apparently to cull humanity down to a very small pool and start again. I have to say I'm disappointed because I was hoping that he wasn't just a straight-up black hat. How very boring. And how very nonsensical. And how very unoriginal. It's a motive taken from Ra's Al-Ghul from Batman infamy. All he needs to do is start referring to Hiro as "Detective" and have a buff guy named Ubu follow him around.
As an aside, if somebody had a virus capable of wiping out 99 percent of the population, why would they keep that sample around? Worse, when they learn that someone crazy and dangerous who got locked up making a play to release the virus suddenly has escaped, you would think that would be incentive to destroy it. But noooooo.
So Hiro goes to the place where the virus is being kept, good ol' Primatech Paper in Odessa, and so does Hiro and Adam. While everything is frozen around them, Hiro tells Peter that Adam killed Hiro's father and he must pay for that. Um, Hiro, you might have wanted to mention that you went back in time and saw that Adam tried to release the Shanti virus and you believe that he's trying to do that again. In the journalism business, we'd call that "burying the lead."
But instead of talking things over and comparing notes, they decide they have to fight. So Hiro does the same move he did with Sylar: charging him from 50 feet away. That seems somehow ineffective against someone who can fire lightning bolts, use telekinesis, turn invisible. If only Hiro could, I don't know...close the distance between him and his target somehow. Oh wait, he can too. I admit that the show is sort of in a catch-22 situation when it comes to borrowing ideas from comics, but I'd feel better if they stuck to ones that tended to be somewhat plausible, like Hiro deciding to do teleport-based attack.
So we also get a return of Monica and Micah and an odd storyline. Micah has a bunch of comics with him that are worth money, some, he says worth as much as $600. Given the financial status of the Sanders family last season (dad an ex-con on the run and mom forced to strip on the Internet to make ends meet) it seems doubtful that they'd have had vintage comics lying around. I think it's safe to say that no comic that Micah would have been able to buy for cover price during his lifetime would have shot up so highly in value. Putting that aside, annoying Cousin Damon gets it in his head that he's going to sell them out from underneath Micah. And then Damon gets comic-jacked. Because I'm sure there's a huge market for hot comics. Oh, and Damon apparently has no idea who he was going to sell these comics too. What's worse is that Micah has been keeping his dad's firefighting medal in with his comics for some reason. Don't worry, though. Because Monica knows who stole the comics. Um, really? How, if Damon didn't know? And why not tell the police? Does it make sense that she would take care of things herself when she balked about telling the police about who held up her fast-food place a few weeks prior? Especially since these crooks actually know a member of her family that they could retailiate against. Monica and Micah team up and Micah realizes Monica's St. Joan. She sneaks into the place and fairly quickly locates the comic and the medal. But then the gang of thugs comes back. For whatever reason, they are talking about committing an arson for hire. Because this is a multitalented gang of thugs that can comic-jack AND burn buildings down. And for whatever reason, Monica doesn't high-tail it out of there the way she came with the recovered goods as soon as she hears them coming. Instead, she tries to hide by hanging from the ceiling. Only she drops something, and reacts too slowly. The thugs pull out their guns and take her away. Good thing she didn't put up a fight or anything.
We have movement on the Maya/Alejandro/Sylar triangle. Sylar takes his young apprentice under his wing and shows her that she can control her disease-spreading ability by provoking her into making her sick. Then he convinces Maya into thinking she no longer needs her brother. I don't know how we're supposed to buy that this girl is going to distance herself from Alejandro just because a pretty American said so. But what's worse is that Alejandro somehow finds out that Sylar is wanted for killing his mother. He shows as proof an English-language newspaper. So what's the deal? Can Alejandro suddenly understand English? He must be able to, right, to find and understand an article about Sylar (under his true name) being a fugitive. But if he can understand English, why didn't he comprehend Sylar doing everything but translating his threat to kill or corrupt the two of them into 20 different languages? So then it's Maya's turn to be stupid in dismissing Alejandro and Sylar's admission that he killed his mom. I mean, I think that would be a dealbreaker in any sort of romance, wouldn't it? Wasn't Maya a wanna-be nun? Why would Maya side with Sylar here, except for writers' fiat? And why would she just be, "Head home after I've made you a fugitive, because I don't need you after one example of being able to control my abilities." Does that even remotely make sense, particularly given his sometimes-difficulties with English?
Anyhow, after Maya tells Alejandro to get lost, Alejandro has a few options. He could try to approach the police with an anonymous tip for that would lead them to Sylar. He could talk things out with Maya. He could leave. He chooses to confront the murderer alone at night. Hello? What did he think was going to happen? He does get killed, so RIP, Alejandro. Maya comes over shortly after and babbles about how Sylar was right and starts macking with him while (unbeknownst to her) her dead brother's a few yards away. Not that I particularly would want to see more of the Maya storyline, but isn't her seduction to the Dark Side a little abrupt? And later, Sylar makes it to Mohinder's place and calls the good doctor up.
Sadly, we get very little HRG. It's established that Mohinder hooked him up to the IV of Claire blood to save him. Bob delivers an urn of fake ashes and sets Elle to watch Claire. Sadly, Elle doesn't have Veronica Mars' mad tailing skillz and gets caught. Which leads to Claire being called "pompom" and threatening Elle with going public to bring the Company out of the shadows. Um, Claire, isn't keeping a low profile what your dearly non-departed father wanted for you? Way to respect his wishes.
One of the things that I'm getting disappointed with is the lack of development for the older generation. We were once again given an opportunity to see or hear about what Kaito could do and it was blown off. Victoria also didn't get to display her power (at least not yet...maybe she's somehow still alive.) We still don't know what either of the elder Petrellis can do, although we're told that they're killers.
Was there any redemptive qualities to the episode? Not so much. I did like Mohinder telling Bob that their security sucked so bad that even Mohinder managed to outwit it. It was kind of cool watching Monica break into the house. That was about it.
The good news: Things can only get better for the finale.