Inside(Welcome to Hell)

Great chapter, Rob! :up: Sad to see that Sarge had to commit murder in this ops but then again, the lives that he took were scum anyway. But still...
 
Hilarious!:D I love it hunter, especially the dialogue! Keep up the awesomeness;):up:
 
You continue to amaze, hunt! Great balance of humor, internal conflict, and drama. :up:
 
Frannie, you're so special that you have two parts in this story. :up:
 
Chapter 7

Bella and Showtime met up around 4am and approached Domino from the rear entrance,Bella was dressed in a leather catsuit zipped up at the front,Showtime had on an all black kevlar weave suit and a backpack........he stared at Bella

Bella:"What ?"

Showtime:"N...nothing.....just admiring your outfit....very Catwoman"

Bella:"Well this ***** scratches"

Bella winked

Showtime:"Oh my"

They picked the back door lock and inside was pitch black

Showtime:"Ok wait here"

he took some night vision goggles out of his backpack and flicked on his PDA........Bella looked at him with a questioning stare

Showtime:"I said i'd seen action before"

Showtime winked

Showtime:"Ive got the buildings schematics on my PDA,i'll find the generator and switch the power on"

Showtime followed his schematics to the source and the inner lights suddenly came on
Bella stepped into the hall way leading into the building from the back and met up with Showtime

Showtime:"I only switched on some of the lights so as not to draw any outside attention"

Bella:"good move,follow me"

She lead him to the area behind the poll dancers stage and near the dressing rooms

Bella:"There is an entrance around here somewhere i'm just not sure where"

Showtime got another gadget out of his backpack and walked along next to the wall scanning it with what looked like an infared beam

Showtime:"Ah ha.here we are,there is a hand print here"

he flicked a switch on the device and it scanned over the print with a blue light and then a compartment opened and a silicon hand film came out.......Showtime put it over his hand and pressed on the wall,a rectangle of the wall slid open and revealed a panel with a computer keyboard lay out on it

Bella:"Damn your good"

Showtime:"Thanks,i have to say your outfit motivates a man"

Bella:"Well maybe one day you'll see what's under it" she smiled a coy smile

Showtime:"Now THAT is something worth investigating"

Showtime got a fingerprint pack out of his pack and dusted the panel revealing the digits

Showtime:"Only problem here is what order they go in,there are a lot of digits"

Bella moved closer to take a look......she rolled her eyes

Bella:" ***** "

Showtime:"Sorry ?"

Bella:" It spells *****......the 4 digits are P U $ Y,they just pressed the dollar twice"

Showtime:"Heh,nice spot"

Bella:"Working this profession you learn that most men think with their penis....present company accepted"

Showtime:"Thanks"

He smiled and typed in Pu$$y......the wall slid open and stairs were revealed in front of them leading to a basement.....Bella switched the wall light on and the lower section lit up

Bella and Showtime made their way down into the area below,it was much bigger than they imagined,there was a bar and what looked like a fighting pit,the room stank of booze and cigarette smoke,across the left side of the room there was a stage area and a door leading into another room

They made their way into the other room behind the stage,it was full of porn material and a filing cabinet

Bella:"Looks like we just hit the jackpot"

Retroman:"Yes you did,to bad it's gonna cost you"

Bella and Showtime spun round to see Retroman standing with 3 heavies,all were armed

Retroman:"Bring the girl here.......guess your talents stretch beyond shakin' your ass b1tch"

Bang!!

Retroman shot Showtime in the knee.....he feel to the floor

The men grabbed Bella who spat at and fought them but to no avail

Retroman:"You 2 stay here and finish him off,Klaus you and me are gonna take the files......when you 2 have finished him burn this place down"

Heavy #1:"But why bother boss if we just kill these 2 no one will know"

Retroman:"Please....engage your brain before you speak,if they suddenly go missing there are others that know they were investigating here and will come to look,this place has passed it's usefulness,now the girl has value in our other set up but this schmuck is worthless so ice him and burn the joint."

With that Klaus picked up the cabinet with ease and carried it out of the room Retroman followed with an unconscious Bella under his arm and the 2 goons circled Showtime

Heavy #2:"Looks like we are gonna have us some fun with this tool

Showtime was curled over as the 2 men approached,as they lent into him to pull him up he opened up and stabbed the first heavy in the stomach with a knife he had concealed,he pulled and the mans intestines fell out......the second heavy jumped back in horror.....he fumbled for his gun but Showtime still on his knees threw the knife with deadly accuracy.......the blood flew off it as it cut through the air and landed right between the second man's eyes....the gun fell from his hand and he collapsed to the floor........Showtime crawled over and searched the mans body......he pulled a phone from the man's inner coat pocket and dialed.....

Showtime:"Cmill ?......We have a situation"

To Be Continued.........
 
Showtime's kicking @ss!:D:up: Great update hunter
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:up: My name is farmerfran, and I support this fan fiction. And Kmack. Yeah. :up:
 
Hmm. I guess this means I need to change some of my passwords. :(

Heavy #3 is a mute. Clearly he's the Non to the other two Heavies' Zod and Ursa.

Great action sequence towards the end. :up:
 
Wow. I didn't know Showtime had it in him. Very freakin cool sequence.
 
Ha,it was so sweet and mellow in the beginning and then I thought for sure Showtime was a goner. Nice knife work. :up:
Good show. :oldrazz:
 
That Bella is such a tease! Ugh!
That password... it was ingenious! :oldrazz:

Poor Bella and Showtime. They seemed unprepared for the ambush. :csad: Wonder what Retroman and his goons will do to her... Thank goodness Showtime made it! Go Showtime!! :up:
 
I don't think he could have done it without Bella...awww.
 
guess I'm just not popular any more.. Robocop has set sail.

:(
 
Heavy #3 is a mute. Clearly he's the Non to the other two Heavies' Zod and Ursa.
Ha.. I literally laughed out loud at this.:up:

So, with Bella captured, does this mean our fearless infiltrator is in danger. Hope she isn't 'persuaded' into giving up any untimely information.

Once again you show the mark of a good writer. I didn't know if 'show' was gonna 'bye the big one' or get out of it(even though he had eluded to having seen some action).
 
Ha.. I literally laughed out loud at this.:up:

So, with Bella captured, does this mean our fearless infiltrator is in danger. Hope she isn't 'persuaded' into giving up any untimely information.

Once again you show the mark of a good writer. I didn't know if 'show' was gonna 'bye the big one' or get out of it(even though he had eluded to having seen some action).
Bella is a tough cookie. She can't be persuaded into anything. But she has one weakness which would render her useless as an undercover agent.
 
Just so long as you know, the words 'undercover' and 'weakness' takes my mind to an interesting place. So you may want to tell me just to dispell the dirty thoughts.

:o
 
And that is my problem... how? :huh:

But seriously, if I tell you, you won't get to live. :csad:
 

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