Midnight Black
Defender of the Universe
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My critique of the show:
Overall it was good; nice setup, premise, acting, casting, storyline.
A lot of Oliver's character motivation seemed forced, maybe because the show was only 1 hour or maybe because writers were trying to quickly develop the character of Oliver/GA for unknown viewers. Whatever the case the monologuing was too direct and could have been better written.
Also, Oliver's personality seemed to switch unnecessary with speaking with Diana. Oliver came off as cold and troubled for the most part towards everyone even Diana in their first encounter. Then at the party he becomes all "Nolan-Bruce Wayne" for no real reason just to throw her off. That whole scene was an exact rip-off of Bale and Katie Holme's interaction in Begins. They should have just left Oliver as this dark guy that didn't want to be bothered instead of switching into a bratty, arrogant playboy for no real reason, it was really unnecessary. It was almost as if the writers said hey we've established him as this dark post-traumatic guy and now all of a sudden we are going to make him a *****e because that's what worked in Nolan's Bruce/Batman and we need to throw people off. Heck people were thrown off already because of the way he was acting.
I do like the setup though and backstory. The show has promise. I don't think it will go the soap opera route which is good.
I give it

out of 5.
Overall it was good; nice setup, premise, acting, casting, storyline.
A lot of Oliver's character motivation seemed forced, maybe because the show was only 1 hour or maybe because writers were trying to quickly develop the character of Oliver/GA for unknown viewers. Whatever the case the monologuing was too direct and could have been better written.
Also, Oliver's personality seemed to switch unnecessary with speaking with Diana. Oliver came off as cold and troubled for the most part towards everyone even Diana in their first encounter. Then at the party he becomes all "Nolan-Bruce Wayne" for no real reason just to throw her off. That whole scene was an exact rip-off of Bale and Katie Holme's interaction in Begins. They should have just left Oliver as this dark guy that didn't want to be bothered instead of switching into a bratty, arrogant playboy for no real reason, it was really unnecessary. It was almost as if the writers said hey we've established him as this dark post-traumatic guy and now all of a sudden we are going to make him a *****e because that's what worked in Nolan's Bruce/Batman and we need to throw people off. Heck people were thrown off already because of the way he was acting.
I do like the setup though and backstory. The show has promise. I don't think it will go the soap opera route which is good.
I give it
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