BvS All Things Superman and Batman: An Open Discussion - - - - Part 73

[Lily Adler]

From the script: Oh lawd.

[BLACKOUT]INT. BALL ROOM, THE SPIRE -- CONTINUOUS
Diana approaches Clark.
DIANA
You're not like these people.
CLARK
(intrigued)
Neither are you. Who are you?
DIANA
A warrior. Like you.
CLARK
I'm not a warrior.
Diana begins to circle him.
DIANA
You have the power of a one. Yet
you conceal it But I see you for
what you are. You're the one he
wants to kill.
CLARK
Who?
DIANA
Their little King. He hates you.
She glances as Luthor.
CLARK
(confused)
Lex Luthor?
Lois and Martha walk up behind Clark.
LOIS
Who's your friend?
CLARK
(to Diana)
I didn't get your name.
DIANA
Diana.
LOIS
Hi. Mind if I steal Clark away?
Lois GRIPS Clark's forearm and LEADS him away.
MARTHA
(to Diana)
You're sniffing around the wrong
rooster stretch. You're a big one
(MORE)[/BLACKOUT]

WTF did I just read? Would Lois be that easily jealous? Did the person who wrote this try to force WonderSupes on us?

 

[Pants Under Underpants]

You know, I used to hope that they would shorten his cape a little and maybe end in a diamond shape, but this cape is f****** majestic. I mean holy **** the way it billows and rolls like that is just beautiful! Everything about this suit is perfect.

 

[KRYPTON INC.]

WTF did I just read? Would Lois be that easily jealous? Did the person who wrote this try to force WonderSupes on us?

Lois would be jelly that she'd miss out on having BOTH.

 

[Black Narcissus]

I actually enjoyed the script, fan-fiction or not. Granted there were times were it was sloppy in terms of grammar and character development but still a fun read nonetheless.

I cheered when I read this.

Spoiler

Superman steps forward. Batman activates his HYDRAULIC
JOINTS. Wonder Woman UNSHEATHES her Sword and RAISES her
shield in front of her.

Side by side they stand together... THE TRINITY.
The Ultimate ATTACK.

 

[KRYPTON INC.]

I cheered when I read this.

Spoiler

Superman steps forward. Batman activates his HYDRAULIC
JOINTS. Wonder Woman UNSHEATHES her Sword and RAISES her
shield in front of her.

Side by side they stand together... THE TRINITY.
The Ultimate ATTACK.

That's great... For a video game cut scene.

 

[ArmsHeldOut]

WTF did I just read? Would Lois be that easily jealous? Did the person who wrote this try to force WonderSupes on us?

[BLACKOUT]
Martha: Clark, honey. If I were to use the bad things they say I could cover the barn, the house and the outhouse.

Clark: We still have an outhouse?[/BLACKOUT]

Yikes!

 

[roach]

I just finished the script and this is very sloppy. It seemed like someone took all the rumors and tried to make a script out of it. The scenes do not flow...and really there was no purpose to the story. In Avengers the purpose was to get the Tesseract....in DOFP it was to prevent the assassination of the Tyrion Lannister. There was no real character arc. I am not sure how I feel about what was done to Martha Kent.

 

[Black Narcissus]

I just finished the script and this is very sloppy. It seemed like someone took all the rumors and tried to make a script out of it. The scenes do not flow...and really there was no purpose to the story. In Avengers the purpose was to get the Tesseract....in DOFP it was to prevent the assassination of the Tyrion Lannister. There was no real character arc. I am not sure how I feel about what was done to Martha Kent.

This version of Martha Kent belongs in Bridesmaids. I must admit, I did like this version of WW.

 

[roach]

This version of Martha Kent belongs in Bridesmaids. I must admit, I did like this version of WW.

I thought she was ok...but again the script I read was very confusing.

Not sure how the GA will react to a movie in which the bad guys wins.

Spoiler

In the script I read Superman dies and Lex doesn't get as much as a speeding ticket.

 

[dnno1]

 

[D.P.]

Why are you guys putting spoilers over a script that's allegedly (obviously) fake?

BRB, I'm about to go through the previous pages and see if there were any good excerpts posted.

 

[DOBSON10]

You're the one he
wants to kill.
CLARK
Who?
DIANA
Their little King. He hates you.
She glances as Luthor.
CLARK
(confused)
Lex Luthor?

Sadly, this part could work and be slightly funny, because Eisenberg probably will come off as a little midget wannbe-king. SMH.

 

[roach]

Why are you guys putting spoilers over a script that's allegedly (obviously) fake?

BRB, I'm about to go through the previous pages and see if there were any good excerpts posted.

I put spoilers in case people wanted to read it.

 

[Black Narcissus]

I thought she was ok...but again the script I read was very confusing.

Not sure how the GA will react to a movie in which the bad guys wins.

Spoiler

In the script I read Superman dies and Lex doesn't get as much as a speeding ticket.

I saw it as an obvious cliffhanger for JL.

 

[Lily Adler]

I also don't like that Diana has to tell us Lex hates Clark. Why can't he figure that out?

 

[NoLaNitE007]

Why are you guys putting spoilers over a script that's allegedly (obviously) fake?

BRB, I'm about to go through the previous pages and see if there were any good excerpts posted.

I want to see more "script leaks" to keep spoiling fans off the trail and scent of the real thing.

 

[roach]

I saw it as an obvious cliffhanger for JL.

but it wasn't...it didn't cliff hang anything...nothing leads you to believe they are gonna go after Lex

 

[D.P.]

Diana and Lois getting catty over Clark was the only quote-worthy part of the whole script?

 

[Lily Adler]

I do hope Terrio follows the tired and true rule in cinema: "show, don't tell". I still can't get over that Lois has to tell us what Zod did to them on the Black Zero in some jarringly bad exposition after saving her. Which also leads to me questioning why the hell they needed her in the first place other than to use her as a hostage to ensure the military doesn't interfere. It really wasn't explained and if it was to extract info, what did she know that Clark did not?

 

[roach]

I do hope Terrio follows the tired and true rule in cinema: "show, don't tell". I still can't get over that Lois has to tell us what Zod did to them on the Black Zero in some jarringly bad exposition after saving her. Which also leads to me questioning why the hell they needed her in the first place other than to use her as a hostage to ensure the military doesn't interfere. It really wasn't explained and if it was to extract info, what did she know that Clark did not?

Lois knows who the Kal is...and would more than likely know where the codex is. If Kal proved resistant to the mind probe...Lois would not.

 

[DOBSON10]

I do hope Terrio follows the tired and true rule in cinema: "show, don't tell". I still can't get over that Lois has to tell us what Zod did to them on the Black Zero in some jarringly bad exposition after saving her. Which also leads to me questioning why the hell they needed her in the first place other than to use her as a hostage to ensure the military doesn't interfere. It really wasn't explained and if it was to extract info, what did she know that Clark did not?

Zod wanting her on the ship in the first place makes no sense, her learning the "plan to stop them", her getting on the ship with the general to help unload the ship/bomb when she could have just told them how, the entire thing was just crappy plot device to keep Lois on screen during the action sequences. It's one of the reasons I don't care for Amy Adams playing Lois Lane, because of her status as an actress they have to contrive ways to keep her on screen as much as possible so she/fans don't feel she is underused, even when she's not needed what so ever.

 

[Lily Adler]

Did she really know where the codex was? And yes I hated the freaking skull scene because it was just too jarring. It didn't flow with the previous scene for me.

 

[roach]

Her getting on the ship in the first place makes no sense, her learning the "plan to stop them", her getting on the ship with the general to help unload the ship/bomb when she could have just told them how, the entire thing was just crappy plot device to keep Lois on screen during the action sequences. It's one of the reasons I don't care for Amy Adams playing Lois Lane, because of her status as an actress they have to contrive ways to keep her on screen as much as possible so she/fans don't feel she is underused, even when she's not needed what so ever.

not really.
Zod isn't there for Kal...he's after the codex. He take Lois too because he may have given it to her. Zod doesn't know it's in his cells.

Lois goes on the plane because she's the only one who has experience with kryptonian tech and if something goes wrong she can maybe help figure it out...which she did.

 

[Black Narcissus]

but it wasn't...it didn't cliff hang anything...nothing leads you to believe they are gonna go after Lex

Batman and Diana still have to expose him to the rest of the world, but let us not argue over some bs fan fiction.

I did hate how Bruce was written, especially his moments with Lex.

 

[roach]

Did she really know where the codex was? And yes I hated the freaking skull scene because it was just too jarring. It didn't flow with the previous scene for me.

Did she know where the codex was? No. Did Zod know that? no.